for Bedtime Prayers10/7/2003 c1 
119AntiPleasure
Don't like the religious part (don't mean to offend you whatsoever) but I like how you did the "now I lay me down..." etc. that was very lovely how you did that. Good poem
*Jenna*
119AntiPleasureDon't like the religious part (don't mean to offend you whatsoever) but I like how you did the "now I lay me down..." etc. that was very lovely how you did that. Good poem
*Jenna*
9/23/2003 c1 28Crimson Scythe
hi! i reviewed under my own name, but i'm reviewed this for my friend AND I- it's really good. i really like it. and it's such a twist on the regular bedtime prayer. please continue writing.
28Crimson Scythehi! i reviewed under my own name, but i'm reviewed this for my friend AND I- it's really good. i really like it. and it's such a twist on the regular bedtime prayer. please continue writing.
9/21/2003 c1 brandon
Brilliant! i loved it.
Brilliant! i loved it.