for Prisoner of War8/21/2006 c16 
28Shadow of the Light
Been awhile since I reviewed...its been months and I'm still waiting to see what happens next! lol. I hope you haven't forgotten about this story! Its a good one too! I love your writing keep it up.
Shadow
28Shadow of the LightBeen awhile since I reviewed...its been months and I'm still waiting to see what happens next! lol. I hope you haven't forgotten about this story! Its a good one too! I love your writing keep it up.
Shadow
12/23/2005 c16 13Twizzlers
That was rather wonderful. : ) Except that evil cliffhanger at the end! I can't believe you did that! But, I like the way it's going. I love that Lucas fired Toni. Even though everyone in the band is in a rage about it, I think it's great. I can't wait to see what happens when Toni moves into Samantha's apartment and what Hunter's been doing. Cause I know you have to bring him back to the story again soon. : )I can't flipping wait for you to update again. Please do it soon. Pretty please with sugar on top?: )
13TwizzlersThat was rather wonderful. : ) Except that evil cliffhanger at the end! I can't believe you did that! But, I like the way it's going. I love that Lucas fired Toni. Even though everyone in the band is in a rage about it, I think it's great. I can't wait to see what happens when Toni moves into Samantha's apartment and what Hunter's been doing. Cause I know you have to bring him back to the story again soon. : )I can't flipping wait for you to update again. Please do it soon. Pretty please with sugar on top?: )
11/16/2005 c16 6Tragedy is Love
"...going to get real weird between the people you’d least suspect..."
ok, i'm scared now ... jk. i guess it has something 2 do with samantha? newai, nice 2 cu back.
6Tragedy is Love"...going to get real weird between the people you’d least suspect..."
ok, i'm scared now ... jk. i guess it has something 2 do with samantha? newai, nice 2 cu back.
7/28/2005 c15 13Twizzlers
I am SO excited right now that you've updated. I feel like I've been waiting forever. Haha. : ) Anyway, I love it. I like where it's going. I really like Samantha (not the one that committed suicide). I think she's a fabulous character and seriously necessary to this story because without her I think everything would be falling apart. Not that it's not falling apart now, but you know what I mean. I think Hunter has some serious anger management issues to take care of. I mean, he can't just go around killing everyone that makes him mad you know? But I really like how you're slowly bringing out that part of his caracter. It works out really well for the story. The song in this story is beautiful as always. I love your songs. Do you write melodies for them? Cause you should. I think that's all I have to say. Except for update soon. Becuase I'm anxious to see that you please glue the band back together becuase I really don't want it to fall apart. Deryck is pretty insensitive, if you ask me. But maybe that's just becuase I feel sorry for Sonya. So, please update soon. Because you're doing an as-usual fabulous job. I love it. : )Twizz
13TwizzlersI am SO excited right now that you've updated. I feel like I've been waiting forever. Haha. : ) Anyway, I love it. I like where it's going. I really like Samantha (not the one that committed suicide). I think she's a fabulous character and seriously necessary to this story because without her I think everything would be falling apart. Not that it's not falling apart now, but you know what I mean. I think Hunter has some serious anger management issues to take care of. I mean, he can't just go around killing everyone that makes him mad you know? But I really like how you're slowly bringing out that part of his caracter. It works out really well for the story. The song in this story is beautiful as always. I love your songs. Do you write melodies for them? Cause you should. I think that's all I have to say. Except for update soon. Becuase I'm anxious to see that you please glue the band back together becuase I really don't want it to fall apart. Deryck is pretty insensitive, if you ask me. But maybe that's just becuase I feel sorry for Sonya. So, please update soon. Because you're doing an as-usual fabulous job. I love it. : )Twizz
11/24/2004 c14 1PhearsomePshycho
It's coming along nicely- I seriously think Toni should get back together with Hunter. I don't really like Deryck. It was a bit confusing to have two Samantha's- if you ever revise this you might want to change that; unless there's a meaning to them having the same name. Some of these people have issues!
1PhearsomePshychoIt's coming along nicely- I seriously think Toni should get back together with Hunter. I don't really like Deryck. It was a bit confusing to have two Samantha's- if you ever revise this you might want to change that; unless there's a meaning to them having the same name. Some of these people have issues!
8/10/2004 c14 Alleyna
K, I'm a little confused. Who is Samantha? Hunter's and Toni's friend, or Philip's and Deryck's ex? Or are there more than one Samantha?
But aside from that, awesome chapter. I don't like Philip, and I feel sorry for Samantha... the one that's bleeding, and Hunter too! Poor bugger.
When are we going to get to see what he's talking about to Samantha? What's he going to tell her? Well, anyway, I've finally caught up and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Faithfully your fan,
Alleyna
K, I'm a little confused. Who is Samantha? Hunter's and Toni's friend, or Philip's and Deryck's ex? Or are there more than one Samantha?
But aside from that, awesome chapter. I don't like Philip, and I feel sorry for Samantha... the one that's bleeding, and Hunter too! Poor bugger.
When are we going to get to see what he's talking about to Samantha? What's he going to tell her? Well, anyway, I've finally caught up and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Faithfully your fan,
Alleyna
8/10/2004 c13 Alleyna
Oh poor Hunter. I hope everything works out for the two of them. I think they would really make a great couple. They love each other and everything.
No offense to Deryck but he doesn't deserve Toni, neither does Hunter, but she loves him so it's all right. She doesn't need to move on. They just need to talk and clear things up. Put all feelings in the air.
I guess I'll see what happens next.
Alleyna
Oh poor Hunter. I hope everything works out for the two of them. I think they would really make a great couple. They love each other and everything.
No offense to Deryck but he doesn't deserve Toni, neither does Hunter, but she loves him so it's all right. She doesn't need to move on. They just need to talk and clear things up. Put all feelings in the air.
I guess I'll see what happens next.
Alleyna
8/10/2004 c12 Alleyna
Wow. Talk about hurt emotions. One minute he's crazy over the fact she was hurt and then the next he's mad at her. When will the communication start?
Alleyna
Wow. Talk about hurt emotions. One minute he's crazy over the fact she was hurt and then the next he's mad at her. When will the communication start?
Alleyna
8/10/2004 c11 Alleyna
I don't like that Laura. What will Hunter do? I can't believe that he kissed her back! I cannot wait to read the next one so I'm just gonna do it now.
Alleyna
I don't like that Laura. What will Hunter do? I can't believe that he kissed her back! I cannot wait to read the next one so I'm just gonna do it now.
Alleyna
8/10/2004 c10 Alleyna
Omg! I am so sorry I have not reviewed. I have been awfully busy this summer and with the end of school and everything it was just hectic. But I like this chapter a lot. It gives us another look at what's going on underneath. I love the song by the way. Great lyrics. Makes me want to right a song on the piano to it. Anyway, on to the next chapter. (I shall review that one too.)
Forever your devoted fan,
Alleyna
Omg! I am so sorry I have not reviewed. I have been awfully busy this summer and with the end of school and everything it was just hectic. But I like this chapter a lot. It gives us another look at what's going on underneath. I love the song by the way. Great lyrics. Makes me want to right a song on the piano to it. Anyway, on to the next chapter. (I shall review that one too.)
Forever your devoted fan,
Alleyna
7/31/2004 c14 13Twizzlers
Okay, I'm not really sure I understood all your reasonings for this chapter...but I'm so excited that you updated that it doesn't matter. And I think that this chapter is awesome and it does make sense. I knida like that Toni is contradicting herself by drinking it makes things interesting. And Deryck just needs to go away...I'm kinda hoping that Toni will say something mean to him on accident and he'll go away. lol. And I have a feeling that Samatha's attempted suicude is going to affect Deryck in some way. That whatshisface...i can't remember his name right now...is a jerk! He finds his girlfriend, who's pregnant, nearly dead and then left. But at least he called 911, eh? I also have a feeling that the other Samantha is going to be like the band-aid for Toni and Hunter's relationship. Hopefully, anyway, because Toni and Hunter need to be together. Oh, and the song in this chapter was BEAUTIFUL. I loved it so much. I think it might be my favorite one that you've ever written. Or at least that I can remember right now because I'm really tired. But anyways...yeah the song in this chapter was amazing. And I think I'm done babbling at you now. This chapter was wonderful. And I hope you get your old computer formatted asap so that you can update again. Because I'm positively dying to find out what happens between Toni and Hunter. Okay, have a lovely night. Twizz
13TwizzlersOkay, I'm not really sure I understood all your reasonings for this chapter...but I'm so excited that you updated that it doesn't matter. And I think that this chapter is awesome and it does make sense. I knida like that Toni is contradicting herself by drinking it makes things interesting. And Deryck just needs to go away...I'm kinda hoping that Toni will say something mean to him on accident and he'll go away. lol. And I have a feeling that Samatha's attempted suicude is going to affect Deryck in some way. That whatshisface...i can't remember his name right now...is a jerk! He finds his girlfriend, who's pregnant, nearly dead and then left. But at least he called 911, eh? I also have a feeling that the other Samantha is going to be like the band-aid for Toni and Hunter's relationship. Hopefully, anyway, because Toni and Hunter need to be together. Oh, and the song in this chapter was BEAUTIFUL. I loved it so much. I think it might be my favorite one that you've ever written. Or at least that I can remember right now because I'm really tired. But anyways...yeah the song in this chapter was amazing. And I think I'm done babbling at you now. This chapter was wonderful. And I hope you get your old computer formatted asap so that you can update again. Because I'm positively dying to find out what happens between Toni and Hunter. Okay, have a lovely night. Twizz
7/29/2004 c14 6Tragedy is Love
i know samantha's beginning to confuse stuff but that part with her attempt at suicide was so sad! really tragic that someone could do that. i just hope that everything ends up okay in the end for everyone. the to the complexity, yep, it was! but it was cool.
6Tragedy is Lovei know samantha's beginning to confuse stuff but that part with her attempt at suicide was so sad! really tragic that someone could do that. i just hope that everything ends up okay in the end for everyone. the to the complexity, yep, it was! but it was cool.
7/8/2004 c13 13Twizzlers
Excellent as always! Though I can't believe you ended it like that! Very suspenseful. Love the song too, by the way. I did notice both Samantha's and at first I was like, wait is this the same person? Then I was like...no it isn't. Deryck is seeming so selfish. I mean that he wrote a song for Toni and all is really sweet and at least he had enough sense not to show anybody, but he should not be wanting Toni and Hunter to break it off forever. If he actually does anything to make sure they won't get back together, then he will need to be demoted to my least favorite character. I'm worried about what he's going to say to Toni at the park. Oh, and Toni drinking? Toni the hypocrite. I'm dying to know if Hunter's going to find out and what he's going to say to her if he does. Anyway, I think I've babbled you ear off long enough. But you are doing an excellent job and I want you to update soon. *muah* Twizz
13TwizzlersExcellent as always! Though I can't believe you ended it like that! Very suspenseful. Love the song too, by the way. I did notice both Samantha's and at first I was like, wait is this the same person? Then I was like...no it isn't. Deryck is seeming so selfish. I mean that he wrote a song for Toni and all is really sweet and at least he had enough sense not to show anybody, but he should not be wanting Toni and Hunter to break it off forever. If he actually does anything to make sure they won't get back together, then he will need to be demoted to my least favorite character. I'm worried about what he's going to say to Toni at the park. Oh, and Toni drinking? Toni the hypocrite. I'm dying to know if Hunter's going to find out and what he's going to say to her if he does. Anyway, I think I've babbled you ear off long enough. But you are doing an excellent job and I want you to update soon. *muah* Twizz
7/4/2004 c13 11DreamNightmare
theres always a samantha in stories...thats y i changed my name! lol neways i liked this chapter...i STIL do NOT like deryck n i have no idea y...i just dont ugh...lol but yeah...loved the chapter...heres a review finally!
-Skyerz
11DreamNightmaretheres always a samantha in stories...thats y i changed my name! lol neways i liked this chapter...i STIL do NOT like deryck n i have no idea y...i just dont ugh...lol but yeah...loved the chapter...heres a review finally!
-Skyerz