for Prisoner of War7/2/2004 c13 
6Tragedy is Love
hey, nice to be back. that was good but i think that the whole love thing is sad. tragic really. i hope everything comes out fine.
6Tragedy is Lovehey, nice to be back. that was good but i think that the whole love thing is sad. tragic really. i hope everything comes out fine.
6/23/2004 c12 bridgette261
hey birthday buddie. it's been a while. lolz...yanno what? Hunter seems like he's on drugs and i think i've figured out the gun. HE'S IN THE CIA! lolz...jk...the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine
hey birthday buddie. it's been a while. lolz...yanno what? Hunter seems like he's on drugs and i think i've figured out the gun. HE'S IN THE CIA! lolz...jk...the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine
6/15/2004 c12 11DreamNightmare
omg i can review on my pc again! i gotta hug brandon really hard 2morrow bc he gave me sumtin 2 download 2 get rid of crap...omg i love him now! haha neways back 2 ur story...yayayay! ive always liked hunter...i dunno y...its weird but yea...neways im glad u updated during ur exams...its a biotch isnt it? neways u jus inspired me 2 type! so i shall ttyl n look out 4 an update from me!
11DreamNightmareomg i can review on my pc again! i gotta hug brandon really hard 2morrow bc he gave me sumtin 2 download 2 get rid of crap...omg i love him now! haha neways back 2 ur story...yayayay! ive always liked hunter...i dunno y...its weird but yea...neways im glad u updated during ur exams...its a biotch isnt it? neways u jus inspired me 2 type! so i shall ttyl n look out 4 an update from me!
6/15/2004 c12 6Tragedy is Love
wow, brilliant chapter! you write well and that chapter was touching. i've told you heaps and heaps and heaps etc. (probably) but i like hunter but he is so weak at times. but anyway, keep up the work and update soon!
6Tragedy is Lovewow, brilliant chapter! you write well and that chapter was touching. i've told you heaps and heaps and heaps etc. (probably) but i like hunter but he is so weak at times. but anyway, keep up the work and update soon!
5/1/2004 c11 Tragedy is Love
you know, at least once in every story there's a scene like that one... the misleaded conceptions.
thankyou about my name ... in many cases love is hard ...
lur ur stori!
you know, at least once in every story there's a scene like that one... the misleaded conceptions.
thankyou about my name ... in many cases love is hard ...
lur ur stori!
4/9/2004 c10 13Twizzlers
Oh, I was so confused! When you changed your name that is. I was like how did this girl end up on my favorite authors list, then I looked at your stories and I was like wait... and then I figured it out. lol! Warn me before you do something like that again! ha, jk. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I like the new name. Good pick. : ) Later. Twizz
13TwizzlersOh, I was so confused! When you changed your name that is. I was like how did this girl end up on my favorite authors list, then I looked at your stories and I was like wait... and then I figured it out. lol! Warn me before you do something like that again! ha, jk. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I like the new name. Good pick. : ) Later. Twizz
3/29/2004 c11 11DreamNightmare
things rnt goin fine but w/e thats life...nice chappie n i hope i ttyl lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarethings rnt goin fine but w/e thats life...nice chappie n i hope i ttyl lylas late
DreamNightmare
3/28/2004 c11 11jules2206
hey chelsea plum said to check your stuff out, and sure as heck i will! this is awesome, tho i love deryck and hate hunter but i like hunters name more and deryck needs a name change ahaha jus kiddin its really good im lovin it and ill be sure to hceck up on some more of ur work cos tis well grooviliscious ahaha BUBBAI!
11jules2206hey chelsea plum said to check your stuff out, and sure as heck i will! this is awesome, tho i love deryck and hate hunter but i like hunters name more and deryck needs a name change ahaha jus kiddin its really good im lovin it and ill be sure to hceck up on some more of ur work cos tis well grooviliscious ahaha BUBBAI!
3/26/2004 c11 13Twizzlers
Wow, I am so incredibly impressed by your songs! Both of the songs in chaps 10 & 11 are so brilliant! I love em both. And now, well, Hunter's screwed up majorly for the second time, so what's Toni gonna do about it? I hope you're planing a huge catfight cause that would be really fun. lol. This is a crazy story, but I love it. But, ya know, you still haven't showed me any of Deryck's major faults, unless you did and I just don't remember because it's been a long while since I've read this. But, it's still a beautiful story and I love reading it. Definitely awesome. I'm glad you've liked mine recently, too, by the way. I was so excited for chapter 12 of mine. lol. keep writing! Twizz
13TwizzlersWow, I am so incredibly impressed by your songs! Both of the songs in chaps 10 & 11 are so brilliant! I love em both. And now, well, Hunter's screwed up majorly for the second time, so what's Toni gonna do about it? I hope you're planing a huge catfight cause that would be really fun. lol. This is a crazy story, but I love it. But, ya know, you still haven't showed me any of Deryck's major faults, unless you did and I just don't remember because it's been a long while since I've read this. But, it's still a beautiful story and I love reading it. Definitely awesome. I'm glad you've liked mine recently, too, by the way. I was so excited for chapter 12 of mine. lol. keep writing! Twizz
3/18/2004 c11 11Broken Dissidence
Uh oh...I've been a bad little reviewer, haven't I?...don't hurt me! Somehow I managed to completely forget about this great story...how the heck did I do that? I feel bad now! I have missed at least 5 chapters...took me a bit to get caught back up. I sure did miss a lot. I'm sorry! But you are not only a very talented writer, but I absolutely love your songs! Sheesh, wish I could do anything half that good. But anyways, if you don't hate me forever and ever, keep it going! And I'm adding this to my favorites list, not sure why it wasn't there before, but it will be now. And if I ever go MIA again, poke me to death or just email me lol ^_^
11Broken DissidenceUh oh...I've been a bad little reviewer, haven't I?...don't hurt me! Somehow I managed to completely forget about this great story...how the heck did I do that? I feel bad now! I have missed at least 5 chapters...took me a bit to get caught back up. I sure did miss a lot. I'm sorry! But you are not only a very talented writer, but I absolutely love your songs! Sheesh, wish I could do anything half that good. But anyways, if you don't hate me forever and ever, keep it going! And I'm adding this to my favorites list, not sure why it wasn't there before, but it will be now. And if I ever go MIA again, poke me to death or just email me lol ^_^
3/18/2004 c11 bridgette261
yes, happy birthday to us! lolz...OMG HOW COULD YOU GIVE HIM A GUN...I HATE YOU MY BIRTHDAY STEALER...lolz j/k. how old are you? I'm only 13, so if you're old than me, I guess you couldn't have stolen it. lolz...okay missy, no more guns and sluts for you! lolz...what are the chances that they'll end up together? the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine
yes, happy birthday to us! lolz...OMG HOW COULD YOU GIVE HIM A GUN...I HATE YOU MY BIRTHDAY STEALER...lolz j/k. how old are you? I'm only 13, so if you're old than me, I guess you couldn't have stolen it. lolz...okay missy, no more guns and sluts for you! lolz...what are the chances that they'll end up together? the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine
1/26/2004 c10 bridgette261
o0o! I LYK! lolz...gawd...HOW many stories do you have? this is rele good, as usual...bladdy-bladdy-blah WHEN IS HE GONNA PROPOSE? Yanno...when it's just Toni and Hunter, I feel like Deryck's pretty annoying...but I'm hoping that it's just a crush cause I really want Toni and Hunter together (and don't purposely break them up so Deryck and Toni can go out just cause I mentioned it you evil author! :D) I lyk Hunter...he seems like my kinda guy ;D lolz...Yea...I'm rele tired cause it's one in the morning and I haven't been getting enough sleep lately...so BE GRATEFUL FOR REVIEWS! :D the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine
o0o! I LYK! lolz...gawd...HOW many stories do you have? this is rele good, as usual...bladdy-bladdy-blah WHEN IS HE GONNA PROPOSE? Yanno...when it's just Toni and Hunter, I feel like Deryck's pretty annoying...but I'm hoping that it's just a crush cause I really want Toni and Hunter together (and don't purposely break them up so Deryck and Toni can go out just cause I mentioned it you evil author! :D) I lyk Hunter...he seems like my kinda guy ;D lolz...Yea...I'm rele tired cause it's one in the morning and I haven't been getting enough sleep lately...so BE GRATEFUL FOR REVIEWS! :D the more chapters, the more reviews!
-Katherine
1/23/2004 c10 11DreamNightmare
this was a good chapter lol...n i jus dropped my pen...well ginas pen...we jus got done takin our midterms in keyboarding -_-...but yea i cant talk it sux! ahh need 2 talk! gina says hi lol um...yea but sorry i didnt review sooner...u no the deal lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarethis was a good chapter lol...n i jus dropped my pen...well ginas pen...we jus got done takin our midterms in keyboarding -_-...but yea i cant talk it sux! ahh need 2 talk! gina says hi lol um...yea but sorry i didnt review sooner...u no the deal lylas late
DreamNightmare
1/21/2004 c10 6Tragedy is Love
i know i'm being cruel but right now, i'm glad you didn't put them together again yet, if that's your intention. otherwise there would be no story and from what i see, the story's going to go a long, long way...i thought hunter was being so romantic. i swear i went teary..._*_
6Tragedy is Lovei know i'm being cruel but right now, i'm glad you didn't put them together again yet, if that's your intention. otherwise there would be no story and from what i see, the story's going to go a long, long way...i thought hunter was being so romantic. i swear i went teary..._*_