for Prisoner of War11/4/2003 c7 
6Tragedy is Love
i do like this chapter but am i supposed to like hunter or am i not? i sorta pity him but he seems i don't know, something. do you like him or do you prefer another?
6Tragedy is Lovei do like this chapter but am i supposed to like hunter or am i not? i sorta pity him but he seems i don't know, something. do you like him or do you prefer another?
11/3/2003 c7 jules
that philip jerk didn't take the jacket, did he? he better not have! argh! if i could i'd kill both samantha and philip
that philip jerk didn't take the jacket, did he? he better not have! argh! if i could i'd kill both samantha and philip
11/3/2003 c7 11Broken Dissidence
Hey...I didn't lie, I do love this story! Yes the descriptions did help me, and this chapter looks fine to me; it's a whole lot easier to read it all at once lol. Now start talking to me. Right now. Make me concentrate.
11Broken DissidenceHey...I didn't lie, I do love this story! Yes the descriptions did help me, and this chapter looks fine to me; it's a whole lot easier to read it all at once lol. Now start talking to me. Right now. Make me concentrate.
11/2/2003 c6 5aqua-angel
O.O *GASP* How could he? Then again... he's drunk *looks away laughing nervously* Poor Toni! And Deryck... thats one crazy ex-roomate he got... I hope he gets run over, it would be such a perfect end. Him and Deryck's ex too! I would say I hate Philip... no Samantha! No... uh... Samantha yes yes, I pick Samantha. I still say Hunter is my favorite character, that drunk idiot! *sobs uncontrollably* *cough* excuse me. Just... don't be too evil on him *puppy eyes* Well, keep on writing and update really really really son!
5aqua-angelO.O *GASP* How could he? Then again... he's drunk *looks away laughing nervously* Poor Toni! And Deryck... thats one crazy ex-roomate he got... I hope he gets run over, it would be such a perfect end. Him and Deryck's ex too! I would say I hate Philip... no Samantha! No... uh... Samantha yes yes, I pick Samantha. I still say Hunter is my favorite character, that drunk idiot! *sobs uncontrollably* *cough* excuse me. Just... don't be too evil on him *puppy eyes* Well, keep on writing and update really really really son!
11/1/2003 c6 Alleyna
Well, well, well. There really isn't much I can say except that this was very good! I like how you put in the subconcious thing going on there. And I'm glad Toni realized that that's what he was acting upon. I hope he realizes what a jerk he can be, but then again so is Deryck. He has no right to judge a relationship he knows nothing about. Eventually it all works out though. I hope Hunter puts his head on straight, screws it on tight, and gets what he wants to say to her out! Communication is a key thing in having a relationship! But anyway, I hope you hurry and write the next chapter, because I can't wait to see what happens next!
Well, well, well. There really isn't much I can say except that this was very good! I like how you put in the subconcious thing going on there. And I'm glad Toni realized that that's what he was acting upon. I hope he realizes what a jerk he can be, but then again so is Deryck. He has no right to judge a relationship he knows nothing about. Eventually it all works out though. I hope Hunter puts his head on straight, screws it on tight, and gets what he wants to say to her out! Communication is a key thing in having a relationship! But anyway, I hope you hurry and write the next chapter, because I can't wait to see what happens next!
11/1/2003 c6 Saradys
Hey... this is pretty damn good so far. it's amazing what a touch of paranoia and bad communication skills can do to a relationship.
i can't wait to read more, so keep writing!
Hey... this is pretty damn good so far. it's amazing what a touch of paranoia and bad communication skills can do to a relationship.
i can't wait to read more, so keep writing!
10/31/2003 c6 11Broken Dissidence
This is such a cute story! I hope things turn out right for Deryck, he seems like such a sweetie. So does Hunter, but his drunkenness made me sad. I can't wait for more, so get on it!
I only really had one problem, and it's sort of just a personal one. I feel like I have to see the characters visually to get the whole picture, and I just can't seem to visualize anyone. If you have an opportunity, could you assist me? Yeah that's stupid anyways I need more!
11Broken DissidenceThis is such a cute story! I hope things turn out right for Deryck, he seems like such a sweetie. So does Hunter, but his drunkenness made me sad. I can't wait for more, so get on it!
I only really had one problem, and it's sort of just a personal one. I feel like I have to see the characters visually to get the whole picture, and I just can't seem to visualize anyone. If you have an opportunity, could you assist me? Yeah that's stupid anyways I need more!
10/31/2003 c6 6Tragedy is Love
hmm, i'm back! poor toni and hunter! this is going to be a great story. i have no idea where idea where this is going.
6Tragedy is Lovehmm, i'm back! poor toni and hunter! this is going to be a great story. i have no idea where idea where this is going.
10/19/2003 c5 Alleyna
Well, new story (for me anyway). I like where your going with this one. I'm kinda torn between Deryck and Hunter. They both seem to have good qualities, and every guy is entitled to get jealous. It's a natural flaw. But I think I like Hunter because he really does love her, and he tried to redeem himself, even if it didn't go the way he wanted. I like Deryck because of his morals and virtues. I know one guy like him. Only one. Unfortunately for me, I'm falling for him because of his morals, and he's one of my really good friends. It's shrinking though, so it'll go away soon. But I also like Deryck because he truly believes that love is real, and from what I get from his personality so far, he believes in love at first sight. K well not love, but at least a small amount of it starts at first sight. I'll keep reading if you keep posting, and give you your crticism if it's needed, just like I always do. Have fun writing your next well needed chapter!
Alleyna
Well, new story (for me anyway). I like where your going with this one. I'm kinda torn between Deryck and Hunter. They both seem to have good qualities, and every guy is entitled to get jealous. It's a natural flaw. But I think I like Hunter because he really does love her, and he tried to redeem himself, even if it didn't go the way he wanted. I like Deryck because of his morals and virtues. I know one guy like him. Only one. Unfortunately for me, I'm falling for him because of his morals, and he's one of my really good friends. It's shrinking though, so it'll go away soon. But I also like Deryck because he truly believes that love is real, and from what I get from his personality so far, he believes in love at first sight. K well not love, but at least a small amount of it starts at first sight. I'll keep reading if you keep posting, and give you your crticism if it's needed, just like I always do. Have fun writing your next well needed chapter!
Alleyna
10/18/2003 c5 13Twizzlers
Bravo once again! You do such a good job with this as always. Ya know, I had a whole review typed for ya last night then my internet decided to conk out on me and now I can't remember what I was going to say...
I really like this chapter. And I guess that if You DID tell me Derycks faults then I wouldn't get to figure them out later. : ) I'm sorta feeling bad for Hunter right now, I mean it just seems that the whole worlds against him. I'm hoping that he won't get drunk and screw things up even more, but hey, that would make for a much more interesting story.
I really like the band, how they all stick by eachother and such. It's all turning into such a complitcated love mosh pit, it's wonderful! I love it.
I can't wait to find out what happens next! Where Toni is going or what Hunter's going to do, and naturally, what Derycks faults are. ; ) I love reading your writing! It's excellente!
Twizz
13TwizzlersBravo once again! You do such a good job with this as always. Ya know, I had a whole review typed for ya last night then my internet decided to conk out on me and now I can't remember what I was going to say...
I really like this chapter. And I guess that if You DID tell me Derycks faults then I wouldn't get to figure them out later. : ) I'm sorta feeling bad for Hunter right now, I mean it just seems that the whole worlds against him. I'm hoping that he won't get drunk and screw things up even more, but hey, that would make for a much more interesting story.
I really like the band, how they all stick by eachother and such. It's all turning into such a complitcated love mosh pit, it's wonderful! I love it.
I can't wait to find out what happens next! Where Toni is going or what Hunter's going to do, and naturally, what Derycks faults are. ; ) I love reading your writing! It's excellente!
Twizz
10/18/2003 c5 6Tragedy is Love
i love hunter! *sigh* ok, maybe not but deryck' seems like a lilyliver to me. very effeminate.
6Tragedy is Lovei love hunter! *sigh* ok, maybe not but deryck' seems like a lilyliver to me. very effeminate.
10/18/2003 c5 11DreamNightmare
aww! this was so sad, so angry, so...u get the pic...lol neways GREAT chapter! cant wait 2 c more! lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmareaww! this was so sad, so angry, so...u get the pic...lol neways GREAT chapter! cant wait 2 c more! lylas late
DreamNightmare
10/18/2003 c5 5aqua-angel
*bows down* thanks for the warm welcome, i feel so special! Great job on the chapter, as usual, kinda depressing tho O.O I feel so bad for Hunter tho XD I do hope you have a happy ending for him too if he doesn't end up with Toni. *grins* of course he could end up with me and then we'll ride off into the sunset... *dreamy look* Wow... what shall happen with Deryck and Toni now? Can't wait to find out, don't keep us hangin!
PS Millions of thanks for your review ^-^ Really appreciate it!
Keep on writing!
5aqua-angel*bows down* thanks for the warm welcome, i feel so special! Great job on the chapter, as usual, kinda depressing tho O.O I feel so bad for Hunter tho XD I do hope you have a happy ending for him too if he doesn't end up with Toni. *grins* of course he could end up with me and then we'll ride off into the sunset... *dreamy look* Wow... what shall happen with Deryck and Toni now? Can't wait to find out, don't keep us hangin!
PS Millions of thanks for your review ^-^ Really appreciate it!
Keep on writing!
10/7/2003 c4 aqua-angel
Aw... I don't know what to say really, i feel really sorry for Hunter *sniff* But then theres Deryck on one hand... *sigh* Sucha cute story! I hope you write more soon!
Aw... I don't know what to say really, i feel really sorry for Hunter *sniff* But then theres Deryck on one hand... *sigh* Sucha cute story! I hope you write more soon!
10/7/2003 c4 13Twizzlers
*gasp* What are Deryks faults? You can't leave me hangin like that! Well, actually you really can because I can't really do anything about it, but I really want to know! I really liked this chapter, too. I thought it was a super writing job. I was excited to read it. And this was a MAJOR cliff hanger and a half! holy crap, what is Hunter thinking right now? Hopefully he'll go over to Toni and ask her what's going on and get it explained to him rather that either walking out and being mad or going over a punch Deryk out or something. Tho that would make it more exciting. lol. Well, I can't wait to find out what happens. Excellent job!
13Twizzlers*gasp* What are Deryks faults? You can't leave me hangin like that! Well, actually you really can because I can't really do anything about it, but I really want to know! I really liked this chapter, too. I thought it was a super writing job. I was excited to read it. And this was a MAJOR cliff hanger and a half! holy crap, what is Hunter thinking right now? Hopefully he'll go over to Toni and ask her what's going on and get it explained to him rather that either walking out and being mad or going over a punch Deryk out or something. Tho that would make it more exciting. lol. Well, I can't wait to find out what happens. Excellent job!