9/28/2003 c3 13Twizzlers
You recommended my story? That's the nicest thing anyone's ever done for me. Thank you! Oh wow, I feel so special. I loved this chapter! I'm just hoping that Toni and Hunter can get things back together quick because they're so right for eachother!

I'm really starting to love Deryk's character, too. I like that he's into music and plays guitar in a band, it fits him well and I love it.

I loved the song you wrote in it too. I thought it was excellent. I wish I could here what it was supossed to sound like. I'm gonna have to go listen to my GC cd again and see if I can pick up the rythym. The lyrics are excellent though I REALLY liked it.

And, yes, Good Charlotte is a great band. : )

Update SOON because I'm itching to find out what happens between Hunter and Toni and wether he proposes to her soon. Awesome chapter!

love.thoughts.and prayers

9/26/2003 c2 13Twizzlers
I LOVE it so far! You write really really well! I love the story line. And that Toni and Deryk have so much in common. It's cool that they're saving themselves til marriage, too, cause you don't see that a lot, but I think it's cool. Well, I'd better think it's cool cause I am too, but anyways, really great story. I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter! Update soon!

9/22/2003 c1 Dark Auro
hey sorry i havent reviewed for ya other stories a didnt get any time busy wit high skool and all. love this story very cute hope u update soon kk bye laterz

9/22/2003 c1 1Durine
muy bueno, and yes CANADA ROCKS, and if bush dies by your hand i shall praasie you as the wholesome goddes youa are, I love your story, very intreging (i spelt that wrong), and i shall read the rest might soon

-Love&Peace

-Durine