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11/10/2003 c1 12Red Iris
this reminds me of a friend of my who i like. i don't know why it just does. very well writen. i loved it.
9/14/2002 c1 3Tiffany Kremer
This sounds as if it could be made into a verse of a song. Have you tried writing songs? If not, really, I think you should give it a shot, beginning with this. Even if you wrote it two years ago, very nice.

I liked these last two lines:

'I cower behind my bold appearance,

And look at you with tears in my eyes.'

Very nice!
12/18/2000 c1 SelestialDemon
It's beautiful! That is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet! I looooooooooooooooove it! Oh and thank you for the review!
12/14/2000 c1 7Alia Nabil
this is good!

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