for Familiar Tears12/8/2003 c1 acccountkiller
Hiya! Ofh, this is so gorgeous! It really...It is such a beautiful way of describing your tears..and for what they fall...wonderful imagery...you are so talented! I can relate to this..thinking of the various reasons I've cried...and then..those tears do help...this is amazing! Love, MIa
Hiya! Ofh, this is so gorgeous! It really...It is such a beautiful way of describing your tears..and for what they fall...wonderful imagery...you are so talented! I can relate to this..thinking of the various reasons I've cried...and then..those tears do help...this is amazing! Love, MIa
12/1/2003 c1 
144Infinite Smiles
whoa! This poem is awesome. Absoluteley wonderful. Very powerful. I love the idea of the poem. Very creative and very, very powerful.
144Infinite Smileswhoa! This poem is awesome. Absoluteley wonderful. Very powerful. I love the idea of the poem. Very creative and very, very powerful.
9/30/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
Wow anohter excellent poem... this is such a good poem! you are an excellent athor I love this poem!
612simpleplan13Wow anohter excellent poem... this is such a good poem! you are an excellent athor I love this poem!
9/28/2003 c1 sakjdhdhs
ditto to the other reviews (especially the big long one). I like the review that also throws in an "advertisement" for their own work :D. HEE HEE!
ditto to the other reviews (especially the big long one). I like the review that also throws in an "advertisement" for their own work :D. HEE HEE!
9/24/2003 c1 Frodo
Another well written angst poem. It was written really well. Awesomely done!
-Frodo
Another well written angst poem. It was written really well. Awesomely done!
-Frodo
9/24/2003 c1 120Heather Montgomery
Wow.. this poem was just so... wow. It's amazing. Sad, lonely, perfect. I can't think of enough synonyms for amazing. You're truly brilliant, melamin. And just remember, you have friends (especially me) who will always be there with a Kleenex. *hugs* Amin mela lle, melamin vanima Fae!
120Heather MontgomeryWow.. this poem was just so... wow. It's amazing. Sad, lonely, perfect. I can't think of enough synonyms for amazing. You're truly brilliant, melamin. And just remember, you have friends (especially me) who will always be there with a Kleenex. *hugs* Amin mela lle, melamin vanima Fae!
9/24/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
wow, this is a REALLY powerful piece. It's got a sort of angsty beauty going on and it flows so perfectly. It's a very unique spin on crying. The very last line just made my heart sink for you because I can relate and you just worded it so simply that it's just like WOW. In all the pieces I've written and read nothing even comes close to how technically, emotionally and creatively beautiful this is.
ahh, and I know how the strictly-assignment-writing-mode goes, I've been stuck in it for the past few weeks. But, I finally broke of it, YAY! lol. It's amazing what a night of star gazing can do to you.
Thank you for all the reviews, they made my day. It's great to know that someone appreciates my work to some extent.
-Tormented Romantic-
63Tormented Romanticwow, this is a REALLY powerful piece. It's got a sort of angsty beauty going on and it flows so perfectly. It's a very unique spin on crying. The very last line just made my heart sink for you because I can relate and you just worded it so simply that it's just like WOW. In all the pieces I've written and read nothing even comes close to how technically, emotionally and creatively beautiful this is.
ahh, and I know how the strictly-assignment-writing-mode goes, I've been stuck in it for the past few weeks. But, I finally broke of it, YAY! lol. It's amazing what a night of star gazing can do to you.
Thank you for all the reviews, they made my day. It's great to know that someone appreciates my work to some extent.
-Tormented Romantic-