9/24/2003 c1 Angele Raye
I really enjoyed it. I felt that breaking up your wonderful sybolism with the stars by barbies was stinting however. I was enjoy the beautiful images, I don't generally assosiate poetry with plastic. But it really was outstanding... I was particularly touched by the line about connecting the stars. Very well done.
Angele Raye*
I really enjoyed it. I felt that breaking up your wonderful sybolism with the stars by barbies was stinting however. I was enjoy the beautiful images, I don't generally assosiate poetry with plastic. But it really was outstanding... I was particularly touched by the line about connecting the stars. Very well done.
Angele Raye*