for When You I Feel10/13/2003 c1 
14Dirty Wallpaper
beautiful, i especially liked the second line of each stanza, it really brought out the true meaning of a physical gesture, truly lovely. kudos
14Dirty Wallpaperbeautiful, i especially liked the second line of each stanza, it really brought out the true meaning of a physical gesture, truly lovely. kudos
9/25/2003 c1 9Soul Rebel
Impressive. I respect someone who can make the art of rhythm expound deeper than just rhyme. And be heart-felt.
9Soul RebelImpressive. I respect someone who can make the art of rhythm expound deeper than just rhyme. And be heart-felt.
9/24/2003 c1 27flying-buttress
Wow, I feel, loved. For those of you who think it's not possible, you're wrong. I love you too!
27flying-buttressWow, I feel, loved. For those of you who think it's not possible, you're wrong. I love you too!
9/24/2003 c1 8Jess Angel
Sweetness. I liked this. The ending lines especially. Good stuff.
Keep writing!
Jess 0:o)
8Jess AngelSweetness. I liked this. The ending lines especially. Good stuff.
Keep writing!
Jess 0:o)
9/24/2003 c1 99Myra Kilgore
Oh Ty, this is your best one. Flying-Buttress is so good for you and you are so good for him. I know that he makes you happy because your poems are happy. This is your best one yet.
99Myra KilgoreOh Ty, this is your best one. Flying-Buttress is so good for you and you are so good for him. I know that he makes you happy because your poems are happy. This is your best one yet.