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2/20/2004 c2 12Aurora Elvenstar
I loved the funny parts. You are very good at describing battle scenes.
2/14/2004 c2 Amora E
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
2/14/2004 c2 Amora E
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
2/14/2004 c2 Amora Elvenstar
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
2/14/2004 c2 Amora Elvenstar
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
1/31/2004 c1 Aurora Elvenstar
Great story. I think that you should write more to it.
9/26/2003 c1 8Vaio
I love the story and entire theme, but I know whats going on in the story. Other readers may not understand everything so I would work on your sentence transition, spacing, and of course the basics always (grammar and spelling.) Keep it up my cat warrior friend more adventures soon k! :-)
9/25/2003 c1 Lauren
interesting...
9/24/2003 c1 No Name
one of the most intrestin stories i have ever read, i say u should submit to a publisher...

btw, i would never steal on of your stories
9/24/2003 c1 Guest
intrestin story, maybe you should send it to a publisher...

btw, i would never steal ur stories
9/24/2003 c1 Guest
one of the more intresting stories i have read, try giving it to a publisher...
9/24/2003 c1 Hazara
Good! If you don't write more I'll hunt you down and kill you. Leaving only a bloody toenail for your family.
9/24/2003 c1 14Raining Dreams
Well, it IS nice, but it could use a little improvement. Im not flameing, Im just trying to help you out, as others are more likely to catch your mistakes. For one, space your dialogue a bit better. It confuzzled me O.o;. Proof-read you things, and if you're writing in notepad like I am, copy & paste it onto an email or something and spell check there. Other than that, it seems like a great story! Keep it up!

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