Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for oh life

9/13/2004 c1 2MIY23
This poem is beautiful! WOW! Your description was amazing...
I feel this poem was written for me, about me.. I LOVED the lines:
"I look preoccupied,
But no one knows that inside" I connect to that really well!
I also really liked your rhymes.
Y'shar Koah! (That's in Hebrew..)
Why do I see this poem only a year after it was posted?
1/13/2004 c1 2JupGrrl
I know what it's like to feel like a prisoner or feel trapped, and that's definitely what you were trying to convey in this poem. It reminds me a lot of how I felt a few years ago... living in an "endless loop" is no fun.
10/2/2003 c1 1Kaiwaf
Man oh man this is what I feel during the last few finals. Totally drained and just...hopeless. Totally irrevelant, i know (grr, i always use the same words...
9/25/2003 c1 44superfufu
never seen anything like a funny angst. 0_o

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service