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for the field of sunflowers

1/16/2004 c1 9Happy-Platipus
I really liked this. A great poem!
I loved the way you combined the description of the scenery and what it meant to you.
1/13/2004 c1 2JupGrrl
Oh I loved the ending here... how you say the world is too large for you to measure but you'll never know because the sunflower field is seemingly endless... that is a super image and I have my own interpretation of it as a metaphor- that there are so many things in this world that you can only believe and never know, because what you see tells you nothing about what lies beyond.
1/12/2004 c1 22MagenDavid
Heck I shoulda guessed...
It's the result of hanging with D too much...
Eventually you gatta write something about SUNFLOWERS!
Neway this is too good for words! There is no word in the whole of the English laguege (Hebrew too) that can describe the beauty of this poem.
This poem portrays the world in such a gorgeous point of view of a true optimist.
I loved it and it's in my fav!
10/2/2003 c1 1Kaiwaf
Interesting. You acknowledge that self is less important than some things, including the simple pleasures in life. I kinda follow this viewpoint...as what is the point of being alive if you can't take pleasures in life?

anyway, good job ^.^

kat
9/30/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
Great stuff, I liked the rhyming scheme also. Good work!

P.S. thanks for the review!
9/26/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Well I already told you my opinion of this one... ;) Love the pen name! :)

"Many things more important than me"- still my favorite line...

I love the picture painted here...

And of course I love the sunflowers. :)

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
9/25/2003 c1 96AutumnRhapsody
Do you mean "too" in the third to last line? I think it's a typo...

I really like this. The repetition of the one line is really cool, and I like how you ended the poem w/it but changed it to 'because' from 'and' it's really cool that way, really finishes it nicely. I like the whole concept, great job.
9/25/2003 c1 9Sarah-Angel87
I am not sure if this is a happy peice or sad, I guess it could go either way. I like it but there is not as much emotion in the words as there could be. It is very good and i hope to see more from you soon.

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