9/26/2003 c172CancerianQueen Hey, I agree, this is great! Well done to your uncle. I love the rhyme in it.
9/26/2003 c121Miamouse It's a subject that's been done, but is presented in a new way so loses some of the staleness. Could do with a little more punctuation, but it does take two reads and draws the reader back in, which is a very good thing.