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3/23/2004 c1 5crypticist
Da's pas mooi. Goed gedaan
11/24/2003 c1 16Notyouraveragebedtimestory
You Uncle's great.. I loved this.
9/26/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
Hey, I agree, this is great! Well done to your uncle. I love the rhyme in it.

~Naomi~
9/26/2003 c1 21Miamouse
It's a subject that's been done, but is presented in a new way so loses some of the staleness. Could do with a little more punctuation, but it does take two reads and draws the reader back in, which is a very good thing.

Mia

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