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7/15/2004 c1 9sheza
Every word in this poem is dripping with sweetness! Great job!
12/31/2003 c1 AVIGON
Sweet little poem. The rhyme in "trust me, just me" was a good idea, as it breaks the rhythm of the poem a bit, and I think otherwise it would've become too much of the same. Good use of repetition as well. It works.
9/26/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
I love this so much! Well done!

Keep writing well,

~Naomi~
9/26/2003 c1 114Aryante
oh! this is so good! and thanks for reviewing me!

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