for A Thing Called: Dream4/6/2004 c1 ElysianFields
wow. have you ever formatted the poem with the words centered? i like your title, and your poem is, needless to say, impressing.
wow. have you ever formatted the poem with the words centered? i like your title, and your poem is, needless to say, impressing.
11/27/2003 c1 
151wastedlovexxx
I love it, You should try writing a poem with a rhyme scheme I think it would be great!Good luck.
151wastedlovexxxI love it, You should try writing a poem with a rhyme scheme I think it would be great!Good luck.
11/8/2003 c1 14Caffiene Addict
I like it. The style and capitalization -or should I say lack thereof?- make the effect more dramatic.
Really nice.
14Caffiene AddictI like it. The style and capitalization -or should I say lack thereof?- make the effect more dramatic.
Really nice.
10/30/2003 c1 121Seeker of the Way
This is like finding a great musical group that is not on the radio or the charts but you see the early potential .. and someone who can speak to you.
Wha? Sorry. I really like this poem. I think you meant "welling" instead of "welding" and is "congestant" right? I am not sure. Otherwise I love the beging and ending. Great flow and I love the shape.
Nice work
not get back into the studio and make that next album quick ! ;-p
P.S. You ARE a Taurus, aren't you?
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121Seeker of the WayThis is like finding a great musical group that is not on the radio or the charts but you see the early potential .. and someone who can speak to you.
Wha? Sorry. I really like this poem. I think you meant "welling" instead of "welding" and is "congestant" right? I am not sure. Otherwise I love the beging and ending. Great flow and I love the shape.
Nice work
not get back into the studio and make that next album quick ! ;-p
P.S. You ARE a Taurus, aren't you?
(clicks all three boxes below)
10/1/2003 c1 Catch Ya Later Alligator
I really like this poem. It hit something inside of me. Good job.
I really like this poem. It hit something inside of me. Good job.
9/28/2003 c1 87LiquidGenesis
Very powerfully put and the cap's or lack of them were right for it. It makes it stand out more than normal puncuation would have.
Bless.
87LiquidGenesisVery powerfully put and the cap's or lack of them were right for it. It makes it stand out more than normal puncuation would have.
Bless.