for Turn Right10/19/2006 c14 
8Crazy.Until.Proven.Otherwise
Oh my God! That was such a good story!
I was riveted, I had to read it all at once! I thought Kyle would save her, but what reason did he have to shoot her? Was it because she knew everything about what they'd been doing?
I loved it, and I'll read a few more of your stories!
Love Jaqki
8Crazy.Until.Proven.OtherwiseOh my God! That was such a good story!
I was riveted, I had to read it all at once! I thought Kyle would save her, but what reason did he have to shoot her? Was it because she knew everything about what they'd been doing?
I loved it, and I'll read a few more of your stories!
Love Jaqki
9/10/2006 c13 1que sara sara
! I loved the ending! I totally thought Kyle was going to be a good guy. I really liked this story. One of my favorites so far that I have read on Fictionpress. =]
1que sara sara! I loved the ending! I totally thought Kyle was going to be a good guy. I really liked this story. One of my favorites so far that I have read on Fictionpress. =]
5/25/2006 c14 2writergurlLW
WOAH! sad ending. I didn't think it would end like that! the ending was a surprise that i especially like!
2writergurlLWWOAH! sad ending. I didn't think it would end like that! the ending was a surprise that i especially like!
7/25/2005 c3 145dfgsfdghftgt44
Her friends are kinda jerks. I couldn't resist myself. I just had to read one more chapter. But now I'm satisfied and going to to go sleep. Good story so far though!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
145dfgsfdghftgt44Her friends are kinda jerks. I couldn't resist myself. I just had to read one more chapter. But now I'm satisfied and going to to go sleep. Good story so far though!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
7/25/2005 c2 dfgsfdghftgt44
This is starting to sound like something could develop, but all I can think of so far is a town like Silent Hill from those video games, where there was a cult or something. I can't wait to read more, but I may have to wait until tomorrow to do so.
~Cirien Phoenix
This is starting to sound like something could develop, but all I can think of so far is a town like Silent Hill from those video games, where there was a cult or something. I can't wait to read more, but I may have to wait until tomorrow to do so.
~Cirien Phoenix
7/25/2005 c1 dfgsfdghftgt44
This sounds like it could get pretty good. I hope this really shapes up into a nice story. I'm gonna read as much of this as I can tonight.
~Lady Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review to the Comedy Skit. I appreciate it.
This sounds like it could get pretty good. I hope this really shapes up into a nice story. I'm gonna read as much of this as I can tonight.
~Lady Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. Thank you for the review to the Comedy Skit. I appreciate it.
6/17/2005 c14 128ebonyheart
wah? thats it? oh no... brilliant story... saw the whole kyle thing coming... perhaps if you gave more details about why he suddenly changed his mind about killing her it would make it seem like he was being honest...otherwise excellent story
128ebonyheartwah? thats it? oh no... brilliant story... saw the whole kyle thing coming... perhaps if you gave more details about why he suddenly changed his mind about killing her it would make it seem like he was being honest...otherwise excellent story
6/14/2005 c14 4Ravager's Torn Wings
THat was a screwed up ending...I was so expecting Kyle to be a good guy. It was messed up, but absolutely...Awesome! That was the perfect ending! No one expected it! Keep up the awesome work!
4Ravager's Torn WingsTHat was a screwed up ending...I was so expecting Kyle to be a good guy. It was messed up, but absolutely...Awesome! That was the perfect ending! No one expected it! Keep up the awesome work!
4/15/2005 c14 hottie-200625661
OH MY GOD! I can;t believe he killed her. That was a very good story, with a great ending.
OH MY GOD! I can;t believe he killed her. That was a very good story, with a great ending.
3/20/2005 c14 Kistoway
It just... Happened... Out of nowhere... I don't think I've ever seen a movie or read anything that portraid such a perfect sudden ending in my entire life! And here I thought it was going to be an almost happily ever after thing or that Vera would've caught up to them. PERFECTO!
It just... Happened... Out of nowhere... I don't think I've ever seen a movie or read anything that portraid such a perfect sudden ending in my entire life! And here I thought it was going to be an almost happily ever after thing or that Vera would've caught up to them. PERFECTO!