for Turn Right3/1/2005 c1 
16Wing Chant
Ooh, that was creepy! oO Totally unexpected ending. I was expecting Kyle to be the good guy! oO Kyle should burn in the asylum for crazy people...and so should that damn fucking Vera. Monica should go there to, considering she may or may not be dead. oO You never know with these horror stories...oO
all the best
loserz. ;)
16Wing ChantOoh, that was creepy! oO Totally unexpected ending. I was expecting Kyle to be the good guy! oO Kyle should burn in the asylum for crazy people...and so should that damn fucking Vera. Monica should go there to, considering she may or may not be dead. oO You never know with these horror stories...oO
all the best
loserz. ;)
1/22/2005 c14 1angry-rocker
Hello echoes of chaos. I can not tell you how freakin long I have been looking for this damn story. It was the first and favorite story I've read on fictionpress, and now I saw it advertising on here, and suddenly it came back to me. I've searched about fifty titles to find it cuz I really like it. I've been searching stuff like "Jennifer" "Friends Back Home" lmao. This is a great story!
1angry-rockerHello echoes of chaos. I can not tell you how freakin long I have been looking for this damn story. It was the first and favorite story I've read on fictionpress, and now I saw it advertising on here, and suddenly it came back to me. I've searched about fifty titles to find it cuz I really like it. I've been searching stuff like "Jennifer" "Friends Back Home" lmao. This is a great story!
12/9/2004 c14 Hannah
WOA THAT IS GR8! were dya get dose ideas frommi am rubbish at makin up stories woa thats realy cool coz halfways froo urn like woa dere goin 2 a ckub im so scared den wen they actually get there ITS WIKID hm must try da black widow fingie (joke)
WOA THAT IS GR8! were dya get dose ideas frommi am rubbish at makin up stories woa thats realy cool coz halfways froo urn like woa dere goin 2 a ckub im so scared den wen they actually get there ITS WIKID hm must try da black widow fingie (joke)
6/17/2004 c14 AuroraNightSky
That scared 10 years out of me! I thought that Kyle was the good guy! Just shows that you shouldn't trust a person who has mercilessly killed before huh? The ending was freaky, but I really hope that she still lives and kicks Kyles butt. Please update when you get the chance!
~Freaked out Aurora~
That scared 10 years out of me! I thought that Kyle was the good guy! Just shows that you shouldn't trust a person who has mercilessly killed before huh? The ending was freaky, but I really hope that she still lives and kicks Kyles butt. Please update when you get the chance!
~Freaked out Aurora~
6/5/2004 c14 1Merlin's Daughter
EEP. This is exactly like a horror flick. You think you're safe and then BAM, the tables turn on you. Teehee good story!
1Merlin's DaughterEEP. This is exactly like a horror flick. You think you're safe and then BAM, the tables turn on you. Teehee good story!
4/23/2004 c14 Omlette Girl
Wow. You say you got this from a nightmare? Fitting. Very twisted. Very. . .nightmareish.
Wow. You say you got this from a nightmare? Fitting. Very twisted. Very. . .nightmareish.
12/28/2003 c14 1goofball
what? you have got to be kidding me! is that seriously the end? thats cruel! if thats the end why did he save her in the first place? no that is so not the end
1goofballwhat? you have got to be kidding me! is that seriously the end? thats cruel! if thats the end why did he save her in the first place? no that is so not the end
12/21/2003 c14 2BlackPanther02
That was terrible...but it was still great. I totally didn't expect that ending. I was sitting on the edge of my chair the entire time. Very twisted. I'm never gonna visit my chidhood friends now...creepy*shivers* They are some very deranged...okay, I'm going to find my teedy bear...
~The Loon~
2BlackPanther02That was terrible...but it was still great. I totally didn't expect that ending. I was sitting on the edge of my chair the entire time. Very twisted. I'm never gonna visit my chidhood friends now...creepy*shivers* They are some very deranged...okay, I'm going to find my teedy bear...
~The Loon~
12/19/2003 c14 freedman121
Woah... I've finally finished this... How could he DO that? That was SO evil... totally evil...
Woah... I've finally finished this... How could he DO that? That was SO evil... totally evil...
12/12/2003 c14 bethany
hey this was really good ... i dont think it should have ended like that tho because it seemed like he really liked her... but anyways i like it .. bethany
hey this was really good ... i dont think it should have ended like that tho because it seemed like he really liked her... but anyways i like it .. bethany
12/12/2003 c14 9Soul Rebel
AWESOME! My only critisism is constructive, saying that I would use less "ly" world. But overall, great writing!
9Soul RebelAWESOME! My only critisism is constructive, saying that I would use less "ly" world. But overall, great writing!
12/11/2003 c14 Purple Kitty
Going...to...have...nightmares...forever...must...stop...uncontrollable...shaking...
Excellently done! The ending was so...sudden. It creeped me out entirely.
Going...to...have...nightmares...forever...must...stop...uncontrollable...shaking...
Excellently done! The ending was so...sudden. It creeped me out entirely.