for Turn Right12/11/2003 c14 
114Wren Craven
omigosh! i read the whole thing in one sitting and DANG! the ending was so annoying! how could she die! oh well, i really enjoyed reading it, B-cuz it kept me on the edge of my seat...but i have to know...was it all a plan? all of it? even kyle killing her? man, at least jenn died quickly. this was really well written, because it wasn't gross or disgusting, but it was what you didn't write that was creepy...i commend you for your good work!
chloe
114Wren Cravenomigosh! i read the whole thing in one sitting and DANG! the ending was so annoying! how could she die! oh well, i really enjoyed reading it, B-cuz it kept me on the edge of my seat...but i have to know...was it all a plan? all of it? even kyle killing her? man, at least jenn died quickly. this was really well written, because it wasn't gross or disgusting, but it was what you didn't write that was creepy...i commend you for your good work!
chloe
11/11/2003 c14 11DreamNightmare
holy shyt! i new he'd prob b bad 2 but i wasnt expectin her 2 die! ahh omg...that was freaky lol...i I LOVE IT!
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmareholy shyt! i new he'd prob b bad 2 but i wasnt expectin her 2 die! ahh omg...that was freaky lol...i I LOVE IT!
DreamNightmare
10/29/2003 c14 keep.breathing
wow. . . that's all i can say. amazing twist of an ending. very, very well written and the suspense throughout the story kept you gripping your seat the whole time. now i'll be terrified if I get a call from my childhood friends :)
wow. . . that's all i can say. amazing twist of an ending. very, very well written and the suspense throughout the story kept you gripping your seat the whole time. now i'll be terrified if I get a call from my childhood friends :)
10/29/2003 c14 19Connor Triannes
huh. i had a feeling what the 'game' was, but the ending was a big of a surprise. ^_^ Nicely done
19Connor Trianneshuh. i had a feeling what the 'game' was, but the ending was a big of a surprise. ^_^ Nicely done
10/24/2003 c10 freedman121
Yow. That's kinda freaky. I'm LOVING this... but it is a little freaky, you've got to admit.
Freedman
PS chapter 5 (the real one) is up on my story.
Yow. That's kinda freaky. I'm LOVING this... but it is a little freaky, you've got to admit.
Freedman
PS chapter 5 (the real one) is up on my story.
10/23/2003 c10 keep.breathing
No! Don't stop there! What a cliff hanger! Very, very good. It just keeps getting better with each suspenseful chapter :)
No! Don't stop there! What a cliff hanger! Very, very good. It just keeps getting better with each suspenseful chapter :)
10/22/2003 c8 freedman121
Well, that was written exactly like an author would, so Great Job. I really like this, and update soon.
I really like the whole... concept, its really interesting. It's really AMAZING is what it is. I love this!
Well, that was written exactly like an author would, so Great Job. I really like this, and update soon.
I really like the whole... concept, its really interesting. It's really AMAZING is what it is. I love this!
10/22/2003 c6 freedman121
Look... Sorry about not reviewing the other chapters. I don't know what I was expecting when I read this, but it was NOT this.
It was completely unpredictable, for me at least. AMAZING JOB!
Look... Sorry about not reviewing the other chapters. I don't know what I was expecting when I read this, but it was NOT this.
It was completely unpredictable, for me at least. AMAZING JOB!
10/19/2003 c6 1Lauren K
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO FREAKY! I kept on thinking "don't listen to them-don't listen to them" you did SUCH a good job playing up the suspense and all-KEEP GOING NOW I order you! write more!
~Kiara
1Lauren KOH MY GOD THAT WAS SO FREAKY! I kept on thinking "don't listen to them-don't listen to them" you did SUCH a good job playing up the suspense and all-KEEP GOING NOW I order you! write more!
~Kiara
10/17/2003 c3 20Angels of Sin
I really like where this is going I've gotta head out to do some stuff so i'll continue reading tomorrow or Sunday or something. Maybe during Study Hall next week. I promise i will finish this and review again. check your puntuation. Thats all I gotta say.
Angel
20Angels of SinI really like where this is going I've gotta head out to do some stuff so i'll continue reading tomorrow or Sunday or something. Maybe during Study Hall next week. I promise i will finish this and review again. check your puntuation. Thats all I gotta say.
Angel
10/17/2003 c2 1Lauren K
no my computer won't let me load the next chappie! Argh-so good, so very good! I'll come back lataz and *attempt* to read it.very good
~KIara
1Lauren Kno my computer won't let me load the next chappie! Argh-so good, so very good! I'll come back lataz and *attempt* to read it.very good
~KIara
10/16/2003 c2 9Soul Rebel
The way you speak of Lake Prahd reminds me of the town in "IT". Good stuff.
I would say "without an ounce" or something like that, rather than "without a tone" when speaking of the anchor woman.
I would add an epitath to the end of "The direction kids go when they grow up". Or maybe an exclamation point.
(bear with me- I'm reviewing while I'm reading;being very specific)
"shadows in grownups costumes"- a grammatical error (although WONDERFULLY written)
It's getting curious. Why is she sad...?
9Soul RebelThe way you speak of Lake Prahd reminds me of the town in "IT". Good stuff.
I would say "without an ounce" or something like that, rather than "without a tone" when speaking of the anchor woman.
I would add an epitath to the end of "The direction kids go when they grow up". Or maybe an exclamation point.
(bear with me- I'm reviewing while I'm reading;being very specific)
"shadows in grownups costumes"- a grammatical error (although WONDERFULLY written)
It's getting curious. Why is she sad...?
10/16/2003 c1 Soul Rebel
Ex-ce-lent. I really like the way you write- "Yeah... it'll be a trip alright". Keep it up!
Ex-ce-lent. I really like the way you write- "Yeah... it'll be a trip alright". Keep it up!