for Turn Right10/13/2003 c4 
7The Silent Dreamer
great story but u might want 2 focus on trying 2 us a lil less repetition. other than that it's fantastic so far : )
7The Silent Dreamergreat story but u might want 2 focus on trying 2 us a lil less repetition. other than that it's fantastic so far : )
10/11/2003 c3 keep.breathing
"make up an interesting life when you're around interesting people". Ha! :) I love that! So true. . . Very good chapter. Update soon! And thanks for the reviews.
"make up an interesting life when you're around interesting people". Ha! :) I love that! So true. . . Very good chapter. Update soon! And thanks for the reviews.
10/9/2003 c3 15don juan banana
Hey.. this is a really good story. Your writing style is almost like Lois Duncan's.. I think she's a great author. Anyway, keep it up and update.
15don juan bananaHey.. this is a really good story. Your writing style is almost like Lois Duncan's.. I think she's a great author. Anyway, keep it up and update.
10/2/2003 c2 keep.breathing
Hey, that was really good, and very well-written. Are you going to continue? I'd like to read more. Thanks for the review by the way!
Hey, that was really good, and very well-written. Are you going to continue? I'd like to read more. Thanks for the review by the way!