for Mother12/19/2004 c1 cassie
wow... I'm impressed. Incredible short story. It was deep... at first I was like "what the heck," but it was really interesting. Of course I don't really believe in evolution... I think it's a joke that that theory is still being taught in public schools. But this story, although referring to that concept, was amazing. Awesome job. :)
wow... I'm impressed. Incredible short story. It was deep... at first I was like "what the heck," but it was really interesting. Of course I don't really believe in evolution... I think it's a joke that that theory is still being taught in public schools. But this story, although referring to that concept, was amazing. Awesome job. :)
10/10/2003 c1 
173the Queen of Jupiter
Oh, WOW. I haven't read a short story this good in a while. The only thing I'd nitpick would be the length of the paragraphs...they seem too short. Some could be combined, but I guess brevity is what you're going for - it certainly shapes the tone of the story.
Fantastic. Definitely on my favorite stories list.
Keep writing! Peace ~~
173the Queen of JupiterOh, WOW. I haven't read a short story this good in a while. The only thing I'd nitpick would be the length of the paragraphs...they seem too short. Some could be combined, but I guess brevity is what you're going for - it certainly shapes the tone of the story.
Fantastic. Definitely on my favorite stories list.
Keep writing! Peace ~~