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4/3/2007 c1 1Resuriko
Wow. Wow, wow, wow.

I love this.

I bet this could be published, no joke. You should give it a try. It's brilliant.
4/10/2006 c1 6Made in Britain
Hilarious, I couldn't have said it better myself.

Corporal Max Swofford Royal Marines Commando
3/20/2006 c1 41FreezingFire
Hehehe... a very funny satire. Keep writing!
3/10/2006 c1 The name's Roz
Haha, this was great.
10/31/2005 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Very well done. You've managed to parodize Poe without insulting him with a ludicrous idea. I'm generally a Bush-supporter, but still I found your poem a very funny read. You're excellent at this, keep it up.
9/30/2005 c1 6LollipopMeems
I'm in love with this poem. Seriously. The Raven is a great poem and your parody is brilliant-and so true! The only thing I noticed was that there were a couple of points where there didn't seem enough syllables to fit the line (or too many), but other than that it was very good. Kudos!
9/23/2005 c1 ChichiX
Your parody is choppy, but extremely amusing.
8/11/2005 c1 24becoming . blasphemous
Absolutely wonderful. It totally sums up my feelings on the war and the deception the government is using.
7/11/2005 c1 Firiel
Wow! I wish I could do this. I was reading "Slice," too, and you have such a gift for twisting words into set forms without making them rigid. Keep writing!
7/10/2005 c1 18lulujynxgemini
i love that, that's hilarious
5/8/2005 c1 118Lady Glass
lolness...this is funnyness...me and the Planet Sparkly Strawberrians all love this almost as much as we love Edgar Allie Poe...
7/3/2004 c1 nick-wordsmith
Wow i think your writing is great. Im guessing from some of your work that some of it is assignments but its like you mean what you say. Keep staving off the indifference!
5/3/2004 c1 14Willow Elandria
wonderfully funny... and miserably true. fantastic job modelling this after the raven... definitely no need to apologize to poe!
one tiny thing - it should be "lie" instead of "lay" in the last stanza, since "shall coninue" is not in the past tense.
otherwise, excellent!
4/20/2004 c1 52AboveTheSalt
You are brilliant. Kudos to Poe and you for collaborating on such a witty and honest poem. ;)
Love this, alot. alot alot.
favorites it goes.

You are my hero.
4/15/2004 c1 Persn A
Heh.. too true, too true indeed!
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