for Undying11/26/2003 c1 
1heros solitude
Sniffle
SO
Good
must
write
more
sniff
Te hee hee
sings happy song not to cry at the sad ending
c-ko
you've got to read some of my friends work. She is on fanfiction and wrote AMaranthine I think that's the title
it is fab too
1heros solitudeSniffle
SO
Good
must
write
more
sniff
Te hee hee
sings happy song not to cry at the sad ending
c-ko
you've got to read some of my friends work. She is on fanfiction and wrote AMaranthine I think that's the title
it is fab too
11/25/2003 c1 17TheatrePhunk
I thought that was great... I loved both personalities of both boys... Sad ending, but very well done as well.
17TheatrePhunkI thought that was great... I loved both personalities of both boys... Sad ending, but very well done as well.
10/2/2003 c1 Mauri
Ah, Casey, I love this story~ *nod*
Some stories that have angsty characters/situations, are incredibly over dramatic and grates on ones nerves. But, in "Undying" I didn't mind the situation or character angst. I found Matthew and how he responded/reacted to be realistic and rather refreshing.
I espeically love the paragraph:
"Dying embers, that thought, that single image, refused to leave him be. It burned it‘s way into his mind so that he saw it whether his eyes were opened or closed. Was that all that was between them? Had Seth snuffed the life out of them when he left? He shook his head, refusing to believe it. He wouldn’t let it die. As long as he lived they would remain alive. They would remain undying. He would make sure of it."
You must write, well, finish more of your stories. Yes, and then post them so everyone can enjoy.
Ah, Casey, I love this story~ *nod*
Some stories that have angsty characters/situations, are incredibly over dramatic and grates on ones nerves. But, in "Undying" I didn't mind the situation or character angst. I found Matthew and how he responded/reacted to be realistic and rather refreshing.
I espeically love the paragraph:
"Dying embers, that thought, that single image, refused to leave him be. It burned it‘s way into his mind so that he saw it whether his eyes were opened or closed. Was that all that was between them? Had Seth snuffed the life out of them when he left? He shook his head, refusing to believe it. He wouldn’t let it die. As long as he lived they would remain alive. They would remain undying. He would make sure of it."
You must write, well, finish more of your stories. Yes, and then post them so everyone can enjoy.
10/1/2003 c1 Shadowwhisper
AWSOMe!
AWSOMe!
10/1/2003 c1 Alle
That was so beautiful. I cried! I loved it and I don't think I could really tell you how amazing it was in words so just know that I loved it.
That was so beautiful. I cried! I loved it and I don't think I could really tell you how amazing it was in words so just know that I loved it.