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1/27/2004 c1 25StarWolf
Yet another beautiful poem. I really like this line: "In this world of illusions and pain|I am walking alone in the rain." It reminds me of me. @; I'm doing alright, thanks. How are you? ^^ Keep up the great writing!
~*StarWolf*~
10/1/2003 c1 1N a I s s a n c e
Some of the rhymes feel abit forced like "sad" and "bad" I think a deeper sense could be obtained by challenging the rhyme futher.

Lovely ending to the piece though, really stops it with an emotional impact.

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