for The boy who was a girl12/1/2005 c14 
3Back of Beyond
it's a shame you haven't written this story in over a year, because it's brilliant! your story does speed up and then slow down quite a lot, but it's generally really good. i hope you return to it sometime!
3Back of Beyondit's a shame you haven't written this story in over a year, because it's brilliant! your story does speed up and then slow down quite a lot, but it's generally really good. i hope you return to it sometime!
12/20/2004 c14 4Poisoned Honey
You have got to stop saying you have no writign talent. Seriously! You have more writing talent that many writers on this site have in your pinky finger! I'm not sure why you keep thinking your writings plummeting, because really, honestly, it's not.
I love how you've made Seth and Ike in these chapters; sort of unsure, and confused about how to act. Also, the addition of Sarah does what I'm sure you intended to do in adding some drama and tension. I hope to see more of the parents, though (I love the parent's). Oh, and I love love LOVE the way you've painted a picture of Ike's life for us.
Hope to see more by you soon!
4Poisoned HoneyYou have got to stop saying you have no writign talent. Seriously! You have more writing talent that many writers on this site have in your pinky finger! I'm not sure why you keep thinking your writings plummeting, because really, honestly, it's not.
I love how you've made Seth and Ike in these chapters; sort of unsure, and confused about how to act. Also, the addition of Sarah does what I'm sure you intended to do in adding some drama and tension. I hope to see more of the parents, though (I love the parent's). Oh, and I love love LOVE the way you've painted a picture of Ike's life for us.
Hope to see more by you soon!
6/24/2004 c14 Alexander F
Hrmm...very nice...very nice indeed. Personally, though, I think you could speed up to the romance part, or something.
Just me. Keep up the good work, though.
Hrmm...very nice...very nice indeed. Personally, though, I think you could speed up to the romance part, or something.
Just me. Keep up the good work, though.
6/2/2004 c7 37musicwriter2b
alrite so im reading ur story and got the hint that u want some real advice so here it goes. #1 im enjoying this story. its interesting and it keeps u reading. #2 i would check some spelling in all the chapters cuz u seem 2 mispell a lot, not that i dont, but sometimes it makes people a bit confused. #3 some of ur sentances r a bit incomplete and i dont get whats going on and what ur really trying 2 say. and #4, watch ur quotations, cuz a lot of times i cant tell who is speaking and it gets a little confusing. otherwards, i hope u use my advice, and keep working. ur stories r great.
~duckyluvr911
37musicwriter2balrite so im reading ur story and got the hint that u want some real advice so here it goes. #1 im enjoying this story. its interesting and it keeps u reading. #2 i would check some spelling in all the chapters cuz u seem 2 mispell a lot, not that i dont, but sometimes it makes people a bit confused. #3 some of ur sentances r a bit incomplete and i dont get whats going on and what ur really trying 2 say. and #4, watch ur quotations, cuz a lot of times i cant tell who is speaking and it gets a little confusing. otherwards, i hope u use my advice, and keep working. ur stories r great.
~duckyluvr911
5/27/2004 c14 1IshiChan
Omfg that was great!I love the plot and the whole surgery thing...It's genius!Please update soon or I will have to die from anxiousness!
1IshiChanOmfg that was great!I love the plot and the whole surgery thing...It's genius!Please update soon or I will have to die from anxiousness!
4/9/2004 c15 150SpawnMeister666
It's good to see you're still keeping going with this story. As ever my only cvomplaint is that the chapters are a little short. Still, I look forwards to the next update.
Spawny
150SpawnMeister666It's good to see you're still keeping going with this story. As ever my only cvomplaint is that the chapters are a little short. Still, I look forwards to the next update.
Spawny
4/6/2004 c15 1FamousOneLiners
I love this story and I'm glad you returned, I can't wait to see the hilarioty that ensues with her and then what happens with Ike.
1FamousOneLinersI love this story and I'm glad you returned, I can't wait to see the hilarioty that ensues with her and then what happens with Ike.
3/18/2004 c14 1Capulet5000
This is a great story, if a little weird. Maybe you could tone down the obsessive love scenes a little? And is Ikegay, just weierd, or just sexually atracted to Seth?I guess we'll find out if u ever write another chapter. Well, keep writing anyway.
1Capulet5000This is a great story, if a little weird. Maybe you could tone down the obsessive love scenes a little? And is Ikegay, just weierd, or just sexually atracted to Seth?I guess we'll find out if u ever write another chapter. Well, keep writing anyway.