for The Beauty and the Boy6/11/2005 c14 His Only
Oh gosh, this was not bad at all! Especially for one of your first stories. I had to read it all in one sitting... couldn't stop myself! The title was cute, it really went well with the story and I loved the plot. And I LOVED how you gave him the name Walnut. Hahahaha. Very cute! The only problem that needs fixing, is that I think chapter 9 is really suppose to be the last chapter, and it got a little conusing there. But other than that, this was awsome! Excellent work. I keep waiting for an update of Moving West: the second week. But I guess you have a writers block... ya me too. I haven't update my Love Never Fails story in like more than two months! Well, anyways, I want to thank you for all the support you gave with all my poems and stories too. I really really appreciate all your encouraging words and comments! Thanks again and keep up the great work with all your writing. Excellent story!
Oh gosh, this was not bad at all! Especially for one of your first stories. I had to read it all in one sitting... couldn't stop myself! The title was cute, it really went well with the story and I loved the plot. And I LOVED how you gave him the name Walnut. Hahahaha. Very cute! The only problem that needs fixing, is that I think chapter 9 is really suppose to be the last chapter, and it got a little conusing there. But other than that, this was awsome! Excellent work. I keep waiting for an update of Moving West: the second week. But I guess you have a writers block... ya me too. I haven't update my Love Never Fails story in like more than two months! Well, anyways, I want to thank you for all the support you gave with all my poems and stories too. I really really appreciate all your encouraging words and comments! Thanks again and keep up the great work with all your writing. Excellent story!
5/27/2004 c7 
5One-and-Only-18
Hm pretty good story to date :):). I liek they way the story goes around the two parts(possibly they will me one of those times). Still pretty good work continue in thst way :D
5One-and-Only-18Hm pretty good story to date :):). I liek they way the story goes around the two parts(possibly they will me one of those times). Still pretty good work continue in thst way :D
4/4/2004 c7 Gnat10886
aw...cute chapter, I can't wait to find out who this girl she has to tutor is. Hmm...Greg sounds like a hunk. I have tons of hot swimmers at my school so I can so realte to Fleur thinking he was cute. Update soon,more Tim POV would be good. Great job.
Gnat
PS Check out my updates if you get a chance
aw...cute chapter, I can't wait to find out who this girl she has to tutor is. Hmm...Greg sounds like a hunk. I have tons of hot swimmers at my school so I can so realte to Fleur thinking he was cute. Update soon,more Tim POV would be good. Great job.
Gnat
PS Check out my updates if you get a chance
1/11/2004 c5 natmarie
Hey,
The title to this caught my eyes,seemed a little disneyish. And I deceided I had to check it out. And I read the whole thing in one sitting, yay me. Sorry I usually have a short attention span so this is a major accomplishment. Anyway back to you and the story. Really cute.Great story idea so far and character development I can't wait to see what happens next, I'll be keeping my eyes open. Write more soon.
Gnat
Check out my stuff if you get a chance, I wouls appreciate it.
Hey,
The title to this caught my eyes,seemed a little disneyish. And I deceided I had to check it out. And I read the whole thing in one sitting, yay me. Sorry I usually have a short attention span so this is a major accomplishment. Anyway back to you and the story. Really cute.Great story idea so far and character development I can't wait to see what happens next, I'll be keeping my eyes open. Write more soon.
Gnat
Check out my stuff if you get a chance, I wouls appreciate it.
10/30/2003 c3 3sparke
I finally got around to uploading another chapter! Aren't you proud of me? I liked this chapter for the most part, but there seemed to be a lot of unessecary small talk. Try to cut down on that.
3sparkeI finally got around to uploading another chapter! Aren't you proud of me? I liked this chapter for the most part, but there seemed to be a lot of unessecary small talk. Try to cut down on that.
10/1/2003 c1 sparke
I'm your first reviewer! Simply wonderful! Of course, that shouldn't come as much of a surprise, considering that I just uploaded this about five minutes ago...
Anyways, like I've said many times before, this chapter was a good start! It's a shame that the only person that you really talk about in the future(aside from Tim) is Matt though. Oh, and Erik. But you kinda wasted a lot of time introducing the others, considering you rarely even mention them again.
But, other than that, nice job!
Also, anything that I said in my review for 'Fame' about contacting people and changing stuff holds true for this fic as well.
I'm your first reviewer! Simply wonderful! Of course, that shouldn't come as much of a surprise, considering that I just uploaded this about five minutes ago...
Anyways, like I've said many times before, this chapter was a good start! It's a shame that the only person that you really talk about in the future(aside from Tim) is Matt though. Oh, and Erik. But you kinda wasted a lot of time introducing the others, considering you rarely even mention them again.
But, other than that, nice job!
Also, anything that I said in my review for 'Fame' about contacting people and changing stuff holds true for this fic as well.