for My Heart1/18/2004 c1 Alise Belvidere
Well I like this too! I didn't mean to "not tell you" about The Sky Is Orange With Delight... I just never even thought much of it. I really feel like getting back into writing. I'm losing it.
Well I like this too! I didn't mean to "not tell you" about The Sky Is Orange With Delight... I just never even thought much of it. I really feel like getting back into writing. I'm losing it.
10/1/2003 c1 
52P.H. Wise
This is a lovely line: "I cannot reach the moon, but hope never leaves my sight."
A very suggestive line: "...shattered pieces scatter the ground..." A very interesting image. Shattered pieces scattering the ground...
Over all, very nice. The rhythm isn't consistent, but that may very well have been what you were aiming at.
52P.H. WiseThis is a lovely line: "I cannot reach the moon, but hope never leaves my sight."
A very suggestive line: "...shattered pieces scatter the ground..." A very interesting image. Shattered pieces scattering the ground...
Over all, very nice. The rhythm isn't consistent, but that may very well have been what you were aiming at.
10/1/2003 c1 8Jess Angel
I felt a deep sadness in this one. Yet, there was a tone of hope too. Nicely done. Good work.
Write on!
Jess 0:o)
8Jess AngelI felt a deep sadness in this one. Yet, there was a tone of hope too. Nicely done. Good work.
Write on!
Jess 0:o)