for BUB12/19/2003 c6 
6Myazaki
That is better than Harry Potter! Ha! I love it. But it made me sad, don't ask why.
6MyazakiThat is better than Harry Potter! Ha! I love it. But it made me sad, don't ask why.
11/21/2003 c6 10ameilia lochart
Hi, Allie.
Your story is really good. you might want to show, not tell more (Ex- instead of saying the robots had laser beam eyes, you could say they shot laser beams from their eyes at Bub.)
It was a really good story, overall, and i wouldn't mind more detail, even if there are too many words. Good stories are better than short ones.
10ameilia lochartHi, Allie.
Your story is really good. you might want to show, not tell more (Ex- instead of saying the robots had laser beam eyes, you could say they shot laser beams from their eyes at Bub.)
It was a really good story, overall, and i wouldn't mind more detail, even if there are too many words. Good stories are better than short ones.
10/7/2003 c6 15a.reading.whore
Yay! It made me laugh out loud! The EVIL SUSHI LADY had a very lovely character. Very imaginative, good job! Wow, lots of exclimations points- that's always a good sign, if you ask me.
15a.reading.whoreYay! It made me laugh out loud! The EVIL SUSHI LADY had a very lovely character. Very imaginative, good job! Wow, lots of exclimations points- that's always a good sign, if you ask me.