
9/16/2011 c1
3FictionPressWorm
so hot! no seriously, dude, that was hot! it was also amazingly written : )) I loved it : ))

so hot! no seriously, dude, that was hot! it was also amazingly written : )) I loved it : ))
9/8/2010 c1 Bubbly Girl
Aww... This one-shot is just so adorable! :) Great job! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
Aww... This one-shot is just so adorable! :) Great job! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
8/26/2010 c1 Ami
It was cute (and a little steamy) and I like the quirkiness of the character's. "Let me convince you to NOT become a lesbian."
Classic. :)
(And well written)
It was cute (and a little steamy) and I like the quirkiness of the character's. "Let me convince you to NOT become a lesbian."
Classic. :)
(And well written)
2/26/2010 c1
12Ami In Wonderland
It was really cute.
But you might want to fix the switch from first person to third person thing.

It was really cute.
But you might want to fix the switch from first person to third person thing.
10/26/2009 c1 animegirl214
:D haha. wow... that's... wow. :)
thanks for this wonderful and sexy oneshot! XD ;P
:D haha. wow... that's... wow. :)
thanks for this wonderful and sexy oneshot! XD ;P
6/25/2009 c1 aixibi
Hey, I like your story.. you have a good writing style, keep it up, and make more great stories.. ^^
Hey, I like your story.. you have a good writing style, keep it up, and make more great stories.. ^^
6/17/2009 c1
13goldenspork
Yeah, you did lapse into third person once or twice, I noticed. I want to say I liked it, but the ending seemed a little weak.
The line with "No you're drunk!" was pretty funny, though. :)

Yeah, you did lapse into third person once or twice, I noticed. I want to say I liked it, but the ending seemed a little weak.
The line with "No you're drunk!" was pretty funny, though. :)