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11/18/2013 c27 Charry
I think you should edit it by updating those chapters as you go, and since I read this recently, you look like you're almost done!

I really like this story because it is a cliche. I haven't read cliches in a while, so this was great! :)
12/24/2012 c27 Silver
Congrats on finishing your story! It was terrific! I loved it :)
12/1/2012 c27 glowingstar101
This is too cute :)) good job!
8/23/2012 c27 OliviaTimmy
Pleeeeease leave it alone. It's amazing the way it is. Sure there are grammatical errors but siriously (see what I did there) dude, it's amazing the way it is. No offence but If you re-wrote it it may not be as good as it is now.
5/6/2012 c27 dmnthhpgmail.com
Your story was great! But there are some parts that I couldn't understand because of grammatical errors or wrong punctuation marks. Personally, I think that you should write a new version, because it was kind of sudden when Nick and Caelyn said the three words after just two or three days of dating. You could develop their relationship a whole lot more. You're a great author, so PLEASE keep writing! :D
8/16/2011 c27 ForeverDestined
Awwww. If only my life could be as amazing as this. Everything was written so beautifully, and I love all the characters... except Kyle and Jan of course.
5/25/2011 c1 MissCiya
love it sooooo much wish peeps would make more books like this about famouse peeps and local peeps together lol!11
11/26/2010 c20 sappyromancelvr
oh. take that, Jan.
11/26/2010 c1 sappyromancelvr
great. I love a character that can keep her cool. These days, too many of the main characters are spineless. :)
10/31/2009 c26 3Floppy125
aw! the story was AWSOME!

I loved it!
10/1/2009 c27 Dead Deactivated
TEHEE! dont rewrite it babe! ITs FAntastica! Please have a sequel! YAYAYAYA! I totally love nick and caelyn together! There fantastic! I want another one please!
9/13/2009 c26 ghurl00
ooh. like it. woops, i meant loved it. great story:))
8/11/2009 c27 1perfectlyxximperfect
hey :) i have to say, this story is great. some typos but its still great. :D to answer your questions, a re-write would be interesting, like developing the plot and characters more. but if you do make a re-write, it would be better if you start a whole new story rather than editing per chapter. :) anyways, awesome work. good luck in your writing :)
7/18/2009 c26 DOMOxKUN
Your first chapter was hooking and I was into your story at the very beginning.

And I loved every little piece of it.

Caelyn's character is refreshing yet breathtaking.

I love the main character being not perfect but everyone loves her and she's near perfect if you will. and that's exactly what Caelyn is.


If I could describe what I think about him in one word..


hott maybe?

a hint of cute?

love every single part of him (:
5/2/2009 c26 starlight-angel88
Wow! Amazing story! I absolutely loved it! Please write a sequel if you have the time!

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