for Loved Forever11/18/2013 c27 Charry
I think you should edit it by updating those chapters as you go, and since I read this recently, you look like you're almost done!
I really like this story because it is a cliche. I haven't read cliches in a while, so this was great! :)
I think you should edit it by updating those chapters as you go, and since I read this recently, you look like you're almost done!
I really like this story because it is a cliche. I haven't read cliches in a while, so this was great! :)
12/24/2012 c27 Silver
Congrats on finishing your story! It was terrific! I loved it :)
Congrats on finishing your story! It was terrific! I loved it :)
8/23/2012 c27 OliviaTimmy
Pleeeeease leave it alone. It's amazing the way it is. Sure there are grammatical errors but siriously (see what I did there) dude, it's amazing the way it is. No offence but If you re-wrote it it may not be as good as it is now.
Pleeeeease leave it alone. It's amazing the way it is. Sure there are grammatical errors but siriously (see what I did there) dude, it's amazing the way it is. No offence but If you re-wrote it it may not be as good as it is now.
5/6/2012 c27 dmnthhpgmail.com
Your story was great! But there are some parts that I couldn't understand because of grammatical errors or wrong punctuation marks. Personally, I think that you should write a new version, because it was kind of sudden when Nick and Caelyn said the three words after just two or three days of dating. You could develop their relationship a whole lot more. You're a great author, so PLEASE keep writing! :D
Your story was great! But there are some parts that I couldn't understand because of grammatical errors or wrong punctuation marks. Personally, I think that you should write a new version, because it was kind of sudden when Nick and Caelyn said the three words after just two or three days of dating. You could develop their relationship a whole lot more. You're a great author, so PLEASE keep writing! :D
8/16/2011 c27 ForeverDestined
Awwww. If only my life could be as amazing as this. Everything was written so beautifully, and I love all the characters... except Kyle and Jan of course.
Awwww. If only my life could be as amazing as this. Everything was written so beautifully, and I love all the characters... except Kyle and Jan of course.
5/25/2011 c1 MissCiya
love it sooooo much wish peeps would make more books like this about famouse peeps and local peeps together lol!11
love it sooooo much wish peeps would make more books like this about famouse peeps and local peeps together lol!11
11/26/2010 c1 sappyromancelvr
great. I love a character that can keep her cool. These days, too many of the main characters are spineless. :)
great. I love a character that can keep her cool. These days, too many of the main characters are spineless. :)
10/1/2009 c27 Dead Deactivated
TEHEE! dont rewrite it babe! ITs FAntastica! Please have a sequel! YAYAYAYA! I totally love nick and caelyn together! There fantastic! I want another one please!
TEHEE! dont rewrite it babe! ITs FAntastica! Please have a sequel! YAYAYAYA! I totally love nick and caelyn together! There fantastic! I want another one please!
8/11/2009 c27 
1perfectlyxximperfect
hey :) i have to say, this story is great. some typos but its still great. :D to answer your questions, a re-write would be interesting, like developing the plot and characters more. but if you do make a re-write, it would be better if you start a whole new story rather than editing per chapter. :) anyways, awesome work. good luck in your writing :)
1perfectlyxximperfecthey :) i have to say, this story is great. some typos but its still great. :D to answer your questions, a re-write would be interesting, like developing the plot and characters more. but if you do make a re-write, it would be better if you start a whole new story rather than editing per chapter. :) anyways, awesome work. good luck in your writing :)
7/18/2009 c26 DOMOxKUN
Your first chapter was hooking and I was into your story at the very beginning.
And I loved every little piece of it.
Caelyn's character is refreshing yet breathtaking.
I love the main character being not perfect but everyone loves her and she's near perfect if you will. and that's exactly what Caelyn is.
Nick.
If I could describe what I think about him in one word..
sexy.
hott maybe?
a hint of cute?
love every single part of him (:
Your first chapter was hooking and I was into your story at the very beginning.
And I loved every little piece of it.
Caelyn's character is refreshing yet breathtaking.
I love the main character being not perfect but everyone loves her and she's near perfect if you will. and that's exactly what Caelyn is.
Nick.
If I could describe what I think about him in one word..
sexy.
hott maybe?
a hint of cute?
love every single part of him (:
5/2/2009 c26 starlight-angel88
Wow! Amazing story! I absolutely loved it! Please write a sequel if you have the time!
Aryelle
Wow! Amazing story! I absolutely loved it! Please write a sequel if you have the time!
Aryelle