for Loved Forever1/23/2004 c16 angelcakes
Please keep going with the story! I love it.
Please keep going with the story! I love it.
1/23/2004 c16 greenishstar
I love Nick!
I love Nick!
1/23/2004 c16 
7You Need More Flair
I haven't had internet access for almost a week and a half, so I have an excuse. Hehehe.
7You Need More FlairI haven't had internet access for almost a week and a half, so I have an excuse. Hehehe.
1/18/2004 c15 10My Works 87
Yeah, not much exciting happened in this chapter. BUt sometimes you just need those transitioner ones ya know? I think the next chapter will make up for it too, by way of your author note. Post it quickly. I'm excited to see some action (clean of course) between Nick and Caelyn!
10My Works 87Yeah, not much exciting happened in this chapter. BUt sometimes you just need those transitioner ones ya know? I think the next chapter will make up for it too, by way of your author note. Post it quickly. I'm excited to see some action (clean of course) between Nick and Caelyn!
1/13/2004 c14 fortune cookie
i really like this story, update soon
i really like this story, update soon
1/12/2004 c14 shadow leaf
hey i personally think you are a very good writer. the fact you update pretty regularly is awesome! think of the chapters you don't like as ones that provide backround info nessacery for the full understanding of the story. or something like that..
hey i personally think you are a very good writer. the fact you update pretty regularly is awesome! think of the chapters you don't like as ones that provide backround info nessacery for the full understanding of the story. or something like that..
1/12/2004 c14 my works 87
OH! A Barbeque! Perhaps a perfect chance for love? Maybe? Even if you didn't like this chapter, I happened to find it very amusing. NIck is such a little flirt. Lol. So I'm super excited for the next chapter. Chop-chop with the updates. (I'm really not one to demand, considering the state of my own stories. Pretend I didn't just tell you that!)
OH! A Barbeque! Perhaps a perfect chance for love? Maybe? Even if you didn't like this chapter, I happened to find it very amusing. NIck is such a little flirt. Lol. So I'm super excited for the next chapter. Chop-chop with the updates. (I'm really not one to demand, considering the state of my own stories. Pretend I didn't just tell you that!)
1/12/2004 c14 VilliageIdiot
Good chappie. Can't wait for more, so please update soon!
Kodiak
Good chappie. Can't wait for more, so please update soon!
Kodiak
1/12/2004 c14 Staring at Horizons
So long as you keep writin' I don't mind if you redo five chapters or 55. Just write more, please.
So long as you keep writin' I don't mind if you redo five chapters or 55. Just write more, please.
1/12/2004 c14 sandra
this was a great chapter! i loved the way he looked at her when he was talking about his mystery girl!
this was a great chapter! i loved the way he looked at her when he was talking about his mystery girl!
1/12/2004 c14 sandra
this was a great chapter! i loved the way he looked at her when he was talking about his mystery girl!
this was a great chapter! i loved the way he looked at her when he was talking about his mystery girl!
1/12/2004 c14 Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Yeah, that really was a useless chapter. But still good! Write more!
And hurry!
Yeah, that really was a useless chapter. But still good! Write more!
And hurry!
1/12/2004 c14 1dabichic
haha yeah the same thing happens to me when I spend ages trying to figure out a good line for the story then when I actually type it out it's all shite, really. Well, I can agree with you there - I don't quite know what this chapter's supposed to do but I guess I could say it's good as a space filler - to tie up some loose ends in the plot before. Good work.
1dabichichaha yeah the same thing happens to me when I spend ages trying to figure out a good line for the story then when I actually type it out it's all shite, really. Well, I can agree with you there - I don't quite know what this chapter's supposed to do but I guess I could say it's good as a space filler - to tie up some loose ends in the plot before. Good work.
1/6/2004 c13 VilliageIdiot
Heh. I liked it. Good job, please update soon!
Heh. I liked it. Good job, please update soon!
1/6/2004 c13 8Night Lily
Intersting developments. I can't wait to find out what happens next:) Update as soon as you can :)
8Night LilyIntersting developments. I can't wait to find out what happens next:) Update as soon as you can :)