for Loved Forever1/5/2004 c13 Staring at Horizons
Reow... LOL
More, please!
Reow... LOL
More, please!
1/4/2004 c12 
8Niccy
Hey, thanks to everyone who has reviewed. I'm back from my holiday, and will hopefully get a new chapter up soon. =)
angelflyl: thanks for your review and advice.. I actually do agree with you, but as I've stated in another review (one of the earlier chapters, can't remember which one) I apologize in advance if my characters may seem that way. I'm not a perfect writer, and I just happen to enjoy my story more writing the way I am currently, I didn't intentionally mean to make her 'perfect' and I have written plenty of others where my main characters are anything but. This just happens to be the one I decided to post. But thanks again for pointing that out.
To anyone else who may think my characters are a bit mary-sue (especially 'this caelyn girl') you're probably right, but don't bother posting 'cause this is the second time I've replied to a review like this. Thanks~
8NiccyHey, thanks to everyone who has reviewed. I'm back from my holiday, and will hopefully get a new chapter up soon. =)
angelflyl: thanks for your review and advice.. I actually do agree with you, but as I've stated in another review (one of the earlier chapters, can't remember which one) I apologize in advance if my characters may seem that way. I'm not a perfect writer, and I just happen to enjoy my story more writing the way I am currently, I didn't intentionally mean to make her 'perfect' and I have written plenty of others where my main characters are anything but. This just happens to be the one I decided to post. But thanks again for pointing that out.
To anyone else who may think my characters are a bit mary-sue (especially 'this caelyn girl') you're probably right, but don't bother posting 'cause this is the second time I've replied to a review like this. Thanks~
12/30/2003 c1 8angelfly1
ok one thing i hate are mary sues and this caelyn girl sounds like one. my advice, your protagonists should be someone the reader can relate too and empathize with. it's quite hard to relate to and empathize with someone who's perfect.
8angelfly1ok one thing i hate are mary sues and this caelyn girl sounds like one. my advice, your protagonists should be someone the reader can relate too and empathize with. it's quite hard to relate to and empathize with someone who's perfect.
12/23/2003 c7 7Salt and Vinegar Pringles
Hurry up and UPDATE!
It's so long!
HURRY HURRY HURRY!
I wanna know what's going to happen. So please, spare me the heartache and dramatic ramblings and just updates!
7Salt and Vinegar PringlesHurry up and UPDATE!
It's so long!
HURRY HURRY HURRY!
I wanna know what's going to happen. So please, spare me the heartache and dramatic ramblings and just updates!
12/17/2003 c12 2pyrobaby
ur not comin bac till mid jan. 2004? NO! i want 2 kno wha happens! ahh... wha is caelyn gona do? is she goan beat up jan? and is her x there 2? i wana kno! lol.. oh well.. hopefully i can hold out till next year.. cough -not- cough...
2pyrobabyur not comin bac till mid jan. 2004? NO! i want 2 kno wha happens! ahh... wha is caelyn gona do? is she goan beat up jan? and is her x there 2? i wana kno! lol.. oh well.. hopefully i can hold out till next year.. cough -not- cough...
12/15/2003 c12 VilliageIdiot
Heh. Wonder what her reaction will be to seeing Jan, eh?
Happy New Year and a merry Christmas to you too. (Haha, I reversed it!)
I can't wait till you update. Saying 2004 makes it seem so far away. Strange.
Kodiak ^^
Heh. Wonder what her reaction will be to seeing Jan, eh?
Happy New Year and a merry Christmas to you too. (Haha, I reversed it!)
I can't wait till you update. Saying 2004 makes it seem so far away. Strange.
Kodiak ^^
12/8/2003 c11 10My Works 87
i bet that little wench will try to go after Nate, or is it Nick. One of those. So anyways, I like twists they're fun. How much longer does she have before she lives the beach house again? So great chapter, I'm really liking it. ANd if time is running out, you better move things along!
10My Works 87i bet that little wench will try to go after Nate, or is it Nick. One of those. So anyways, I like twists they're fun. How much longer does she have before she lives the beach house again? So great chapter, I'm really liking it. ANd if time is running out, you better move things along!
12/8/2003 c11 Kat
AH cliffie, bad. Still lovin it, tho, continue!
AH cliffie, bad. Still lovin it, tho, continue!
12/1/2003 c10 8Night Lily
Again I like this chapter, it's seeming to move osmewhere now:) update soon:)
8Night LilyAgain I like this chapter, it's seeming to move osmewhere now:) update soon:)
12/1/2003 c10 10My Works 87
Great chapter! Glad that she finally talked to Nick again. I kind of like his somewhat hotty attitude because although Caelyn isn't famous she kind of has that famous like attitude too. I think they both need people that act a little indifferent to them. Yeah for updates!-
10My Works 87Great chapter! Glad that she finally talked to Nick again. I kind of like his somewhat hotty attitude because although Caelyn isn't famous she kind of has that famous like attitude too. I think they both need people that act a little indifferent to them. Yeah for updates!-
11/29/2003 c10 2pyrobaby
hey hey... like it so far. is nicholas ever gona tell caely how good she really is @ signin? they r gona hock up rnt they..? ;) well i quess ill jus have 2 wait and c... hope hte next chapter comes out soon!
2pyrobabyhey hey... like it so far. is nicholas ever gona tell caely how good she really is @ signin? they r gona hock up rnt they..? ;) well i quess ill jus have 2 wait and c... hope hte next chapter comes out soon!
11/29/2003 c10 VilliageIdiot
I like the chappie. Those girls at the party were a tad annoying. I really don't like people like that. Arg.
Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!
On a totally random note, I love your new penname. It's cool. =D
Update soon!
Kodiak ^^
I like the chappie. Those girls at the party were a tad annoying. I really don't like people like that. Arg.
Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!
On a totally random note, I love your new penname. It's cool. =D
Update soon!
Kodiak ^^