for Loved Forever11/28/2003 c9 Kat
I like. I especially love your dialogue and your characters and the fact that Fields isn't hanging all over Chesire. I also like however calls each other by their last names. Anyway, continue!
I like. I especially love your dialogue and your characters and the fact that Fields isn't hanging all over Chesire. I also like however calls each other by their last names. Anyway, continue!
11/26/2003 c9 
8Night Lily
Cute story :) and good start, but I'd like it if you got going with the Caelyn/ Nick stuff you seem to be foreshadowing (lol- i'm sure impatient)
Update soon please:)
8Night LilyCute story :) and good start, but I'd like it if you got going with the Caelyn/ Nick stuff you seem to be foreshadowing (lol- i'm sure impatient)
Update soon please:)
11/26/2003 c9 2pyrobaby
i like i like! lol... u have be got on this story now.. i cant wiat till the next chapter comes out! keep writin!
2pyrobabyi like i like! lol... u have be got on this story now.. i cant wiat till the next chapter comes out! keep writin!
11/26/2003 c9 VilliageIdiot
Heh. Can't wait to see what happens during the party. Will a young Mr. Cheshire make an appearance? Hm? Bet so.
Please update soon!
Kodiak ^^
Heh. Can't wait to see what happens during the party. Will a young Mr. Cheshire make an appearance? Hm? Bet so.
Please update soon!
Kodiak ^^
11/23/2003 c2 Summer Kiss
Hey, just wanted to say thanks for the reviews. :) I've been out of state for the past four days.. so sorry for the wait. Another chapter will 'hopefully' be up soon. ~ x
Hey, just wanted to say thanks for the reviews. :) I've been out of state for the past four days.. so sorry for the wait. Another chapter will 'hopefully' be up soon. ~ x
11/21/2003 c8 Xaared
Just finished reading your story. I like it; it's pretty good. I think it's kind of unfair that you only have like 20 reviews, so here you go, another one for you. Update soon.
Just finished reading your story. I like it; it's pretty good. I think it's kind of unfair that you only have like 20 reviews, so here you go, another one for you. Update soon.
11/17/2003 c1 Warren Sterling
not even worth rating at PG-13 not that bad, good story well written, executed, good plot, old plot but done extremely well
not even worth rating at PG-13 not that bad, good story well written, executed, good plot, old plot but done extremely well
11/16/2003 c8 sumone
just wanted to say ur story's real gd...don't give up
just wanted to say ur story's real gd...don't give up
11/14/2003 c8 10My Works 87
You're currently my favorite person because you updated! Yay! I just love this story and I can't wait for the next excounter between Caelyn and Nick. It shall be exciting no? Perhaps at the A-party? hehe...so good job and since I reviewed I think you should update soon. huh...huh...please?
10My Works 87You're currently my favorite person because you updated! Yay! I just love this story and I can't wait for the next excounter between Caelyn and Nick. It shall be exciting no? Perhaps at the A-party? hehe...so good job and since I reviewed I think you should update soon. huh...huh...please?
11/14/2003 c8 VilliageIdiot
Hehe. Good job. I can't wait to see what happens at the party! Please update soon!
Kodiak ^^
Hehe. Good job. I can't wait to see what happens at the party! Please update soon!
Kodiak ^^
11/3/2003 c7 10My Works 87
Oh I like this chapter! I wish my summer could be like that, sigh' haha! Instead I get a buttload of schoolwork! Oh well. SO great chapter, and the wait wasn't too long, although I prefer them more often. Not to complain or anything. SO good job, keep up the good work and the hott guys, hehe!
10My Works 87Oh I like this chapter! I wish my summer could be like that, sigh' haha! Instead I get a buttload of schoolwork! Oh well. SO great chapter, and the wait wasn't too long, although I prefer them more often. Not to complain or anything. SO good job, keep up the good work and the hott guys, hehe!
11/3/2003 c7 Summer Kiss
Hey, just wanted to say thanks to all my reviewers! hehe, not that I have too much.
Anywayz, just a note on the whole 'Mary-Sue' thing.
First of all, thanks for your comment. :)
I know that Mary-Sue stories tend to become boring and predictable.. and I apologize in advance if my story seems to be heading that way. However, like I mentioned in my bio.. I am only fifteen and write stories for fun. Don't worry, I'm not making all my characters perfect.. they do have some flaws (I just mightn't have reached that stage yet). Sometimes my characters just have to seem that way to make the story work, so once again I apologize in advance if it all seems too Mary-Sue. I've written heaps of stories before (though this is my first one of fictionpress.com), and for the most part, I write just because I love it. ^^ And if heading to Mary-Sue ville helps me to enjoy my writing more, then I'm probably gonna keep heading to Mary-Sue ville. (Not intentionally, I promise!)
EEk.. I didn't actually mean to go on like that. Really.. -.-' I appreciate everyone's comments and I just thought that if one person though my story was heading for Mary-Sue ville, other people would too. Which is why I just wanted to clear that up. ;)
Um, uh.. maybe I should just shut up now? I think that sounds like a good idea.
- Summer Kiss x
PS. I hope you all can put up with me.. hehe.
Hey, just wanted to say thanks to all my reviewers! hehe, not that I have too much.
Anywayz, just a note on the whole 'Mary-Sue' thing.
First of all, thanks for your comment. :)
I know that Mary-Sue stories tend to become boring and predictable.. and I apologize in advance if my story seems to be heading that way. However, like I mentioned in my bio.. I am only fifteen and write stories for fun. Don't worry, I'm not making all my characters perfect.. they do have some flaws (I just mightn't have reached that stage yet). Sometimes my characters just have to seem that way to make the story work, so once again I apologize in advance if it all seems too Mary-Sue. I've written heaps of stories before (though this is my first one of fictionpress.com), and for the most part, I write just because I love it. ^^ And if heading to Mary-Sue ville helps me to enjoy my writing more, then I'm probably gonna keep heading to Mary-Sue ville. (Not intentionally, I promise!)
EEk.. I didn't actually mean to go on like that. Really.. -.-' I appreciate everyone's comments and I just thought that if one person though my story was heading for Mary-Sue ville, other people would too. Which is why I just wanted to clear that up. ;)
Um, uh.. maybe I should just shut up now? I think that sounds like a good idea.
- Summer Kiss x
PS. I hope you all can put up with me.. hehe.
11/3/2003 c7 7You Need More Flair
We're heading for Mary-Sue ville, please put us back on course...
More, please!
7You Need More FlairWe're heading for Mary-Sue ville, please put us back on course...
More, please!