for Loved Forever1/29/2009 c27 
5Lizzy0077
i loved this stroy, even if it is a little cliche. one thing i'd like to know is how to pronounce caelyn's name,
thanx-lizz
5Lizzy0077i loved this stroy, even if it is a little cliche. one thing i'd like to know is how to pronounce caelyn's name,
thanx-lizz
9/14/2008 c27 1Imparfait Pourtant Parfait
Your story idea is pretty good regardless of the clichedness, but I think a rewrite would be nice as they characters are very 2D and don't seem to have any flaws. It would also be best if you made the rewrite seperately because it gets confusing when authors post re-writes chapter by chapter.
1Imparfait Pourtant ParfaitYour story idea is pretty good regardless of the clichedness, but I think a rewrite would be nice as they characters are very 2D and don't seem to have any flaws. It would also be best if you made the rewrite seperately because it gets confusing when authors post re-writes chapter by chapter.
2/18/2008 c27 2artistic dreamer
hi! i just started your story yesterday, and i finally finished it. as much as you think that it's cliche, i totally love it. actually, i love all stories that are cliches, but i never read one about a movie star so this was an interesting one.
i know this is probably too late to give my opinions, but since you haven't wrote or posted actually the re write, my answers to your questions would be, i wouldn't mind reading a rewrite, i would love to see what sorta changes you're gonna make, and also starting a whole new story would be better, in my opinion, since it wouldn't be quite confusing as to which was the old and which was the new and readers can read both stories. you don't have to take me too seriously, just do whatever you feel like doing :D that's all i guess
2artistic dreamerhi! i just started your story yesterday, and i finally finished it. as much as you think that it's cliche, i totally love it. actually, i love all stories that are cliches, but i never read one about a movie star so this was an interesting one.
i know this is probably too late to give my opinions, but since you haven't wrote or posted actually the re write, my answers to your questions would be, i wouldn't mind reading a rewrite, i would love to see what sorta changes you're gonna make, and also starting a whole new story would be better, in my opinion, since it wouldn't be quite confusing as to which was the old and which was the new and readers can read both stories. you don't have to take me too seriously, just do whatever you feel like doing :D that's all i guess
12/16/2007 c27 EdwardDazzlesMe
Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe
Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe
12/10/2007 c27 MostWantedDesire
hey
i liked your story
i read your suggestion and i think that you should keep the story the same way
if you change it then it loses alot that it already had in it
if you know what i mean
hey
i liked your story
i read your suggestion and i think that you should keep the story the same way
if you change it then it loses alot that it already had in it
if you know what i mean
9/19/2007 c27 PCS
I honestly don't get on this site often at all(can't remember the last time it was) but I do remember this story, and would love a rewrite. It would give me an excuse to come back more often.
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I honestly don't get on this site often at all(can't remember the last time it was) but I do remember this story, and would love a rewrite. It would give me an excuse to come back more often.
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