for Loved Forever7/10/2007 c2 Indecisive Fairy
Interesting chapter titles! your a great author! been so long since I've read a great story!
Interesting chapter titles! your a great author! been so long since I've read a great story!
4/23/2007 c26 Mean titan
OMFG I absoultly loved this story. I twas amazing.
OMFG I absoultly loved this story. I twas amazing.
4/23/2007 c22 Mean titan
Ack!
Ack!
4/22/2007 c12 Mean titan
Heh... So I sense a fight
Heh... So I sense a fight
4/21/2007 c1 Mean titan
I luff it!
I luff it!
10/7/2006 c26 xo-pauli-ox
noo.. it ended =[ nick is so sweet =D n lol danielle's jst.. *blegh* neway i loved ur story! plz write a sequel or something.. its stil kind of hanging... =D
noo.. it ended =[ nick is so sweet =D n lol danielle's jst.. *blegh* neway i loved ur story! plz write a sequel or something.. its stil kind of hanging... =D
10/4/2006 c26 Kim
you deserve more reviews, i absolutely loved it, i wish you did a sequel.
you deserve more reviews, i absolutely loved it, i wish you did a sequel.
8/21/2006 c11 
10cherrypiesizzle
Oh, heheh one more thing to add. Making them actually meet a second time in chapter ten is a bit far along.
10cherrypiesizzleOh, heheh one more thing to add. Making them actually meet a second time in chapter ten is a bit far along.
8/21/2006 c10 cherrypiesizzle
This is a good story, but I think what turns people away from it is that...this is a romance story, right? Well then why the hell haven't the two people even really MET yet, except for that one time at the beach? It's like you're making them avoid each other. Nick's going around with Chris while Caelyn's at the party. And where are the bodyguards? With people supposedly this famous and the way that everyone knows that they're filming at the beach, they need to be extra cautious when they're going out. Sorry, it's just not very realistic. Well, that's my opinion anyway, because I find myself bored and thinking like, 'when is the story actually going to start?'
Anyway that's just a suggestion, I know how first stories are. Your one-shot's pretty good anyhow, and you hey you won an award for it too!
This is a good story, but I think what turns people away from it is that...this is a romance story, right? Well then why the hell haven't the two people even really MET yet, except for that one time at the beach? It's like you're making them avoid each other. Nick's going around with Chris while Caelyn's at the party. And where are the bodyguards? With people supposedly this famous and the way that everyone knows that they're filming at the beach, they need to be extra cautious when they're going out. Sorry, it's just not very realistic. Well, that's my opinion anyway, because I find myself bored and thinking like, 'when is the story actually going to start?'
Anyway that's just a suggestion, I know how first stories are. Your one-shot's pretty good anyhow, and you hey you won an award for it too!