for Dogs Will Live4/25/2004 c1 Alaurei
I have no idea what it means to tell you the truth. XD Your poems are always so full of different things that my mind is overwhelmed and it's hard to comprehend. Hmm, what to say then? LoL :D I'm speechless.
I loved how it constantly jumped around. I hate poems that concentrate on one exact feeling with different words that mean the same thing. But your poems don't do that and I love that about your poems. Nice work.
-Nickel City
I have no idea what it means to tell you the truth. XD Your poems are always so full of different things that my mind is overwhelmed and it's hard to comprehend. Hmm, what to say then? LoL :D I'm speechless.
I loved how it constantly jumped around. I hate poems that concentrate on one exact feeling with different words that mean the same thing. But your poems don't do that and I love that about your poems. Nice work.
-Nickel City
1110/11/2003 c1 Galea
This one was a little weird...
Darn, now I'm hungry and I want pudding...Kidding.
The pudding part is neat though.
Is the she you mention supposed to be anyone in particular?
¤Galea¤
Uhhmm, please upgrade Attack.
This one was a little weird...
Darn, now I'm hungry and I want pudding...Kidding.
The pudding part is neat though.
Is the she you mention supposed to be anyone in particular?
¤Galea¤
Uhhmm, please upgrade Attack.
10/6/2003 c1 Belle the Shadow-Cat
Hey, hmm . . . deep meaning, but i think i get it.
At first, dying may seem like a horrible thing, but, for those of us who believe in life after death, resurecction, etc. We really don't die. Heaven, you could say.
I can see why you did "all dogs will live"
"all dogs go to heaven" lol.
yeah, upgrade . . . uhh . . . Speed
Hey, hmm . . . deep meaning, but i think i get it.
At first, dying may seem like a horrible thing, but, for those of us who believe in life after death, resurecction, etc. We really don't die. Heaven, you could say.
I can see why you did "all dogs will live"
"all dogs go to heaven" lol.
yeah, upgrade . . . uhh . . . Speed
10/6/2003 c1 TygirSky
I think it's about someone who is like a dog, a slave or something. Someone like that, who was miss-treated in the past, but then was taken in a kind story-teller who teaches this person that their past is part of them, but they have no resine to fear it anylonger. For the pudding, i think it may have to do with the resine this person was miss-treated, and it may have to do with the red dye also. Maybe the red dye is blood.
I think it's about someone who is like a dog, a slave or something. Someone like that, who was miss-treated in the past, but then was taken in a kind story-teller who teaches this person that their past is part of them, but they have no resine to fear it anylonger. For the pudding, i think it may have to do with the resine this person was miss-treated, and it may have to do with the red dye also. Maybe the red dye is blood.