for The Most Popular Girl In School7/11/2013 c1 Guest
Brilliant poem... It's sad that she committed suicide..
Brilliant poem... It's sad that she committed suicide..
11/25/2012 c1 Dandy352
I wish someone could have helped her. This shows a usually unexpressed side of life. It's deep. I admire you for writing it.
I wish someone could have helped her. This shows a usually unexpressed side of life. It's deep. I admire you for writing it.
9/7/2012 c1 Guest
oh! that was tragic...
oh! that was tragic...
8/6/2012 c1 wizard patronus 32
this is one of the best story poems ive ever read :) it draws u in and theres a major twist at the end. i loved it!
this is one of the best story poems ive ever read :) it draws u in and theres a major twist at the end. i loved it!
6/21/2012 c1 
3tiiinam
I hate hate hate poetry, seriously. I just don't like the stanza stuff. I love fluent reading, and poetry just doesn't do that for me. But, I wanted to tell you THIS piece had me. It was absolutely the best thing i've read. You had so much emotion, and it was so.. real. Congrats, you've achieved. I liked your poetry.
3tiiinamI hate hate hate poetry, seriously. I just don't like the stanza stuff. I love fluent reading, and poetry just doesn't do that for me. But, I wanted to tell you THIS piece had me. It was absolutely the best thing i've read. You had so much emotion, and it was so.. real. Congrats, you've achieved. I liked your poetry.
7/11/2010 c1 Slasherfanatic26
Oh wow. This was an amazing, breathtaking poem. It had an odd twist that was both humorous and disturbing. I compliment you on that! I am going to start reading your series soon, so I can't wait!
Oh wow. This was an amazing, breathtaking poem. It had an odd twist that was both humorous and disturbing. I compliment you on that! I am going to start reading your series soon, so I can't wait!
12/22/2009 c1 20Minor Masterpiece
sosososo real.
wow.
it's screaming to those souls, the kids that go through life invisable.
it also has a creepy undertone where you're not sure if the girl is mentally stable.
well done!
20Minor Masterpiecesosososo real.
wow.
it's screaming to those souls, the kids that go through life invisable.
it also has a creepy undertone where you're not sure if the girl is mentally stable.
well done!
12/1/2008 c1 26daniellegypt
The twist was sick, in a good way :]
Though, the writing could have been better.
26daniellegyptThe twist was sick, in a good way :]
Though, the writing could have been better.
3/25/2007 c1 Holly
Nice ending! ;)
Nice ending! ;)
3/20/2007 c1 73ten pts above average
the title got my attention..how I wish I could be the most popular girl in school...
wow..Im absolutely speechless..I couldnt stop reading..and the ending was perfect..wow..bravo! this is amazing..you are quite the writer..this inspires me to write something similar! most definitely going on my favorites list! and I`ll definitely recommend my friends to read this!
wow..Im still speechless
73ten pts above averagethe title got my attention..how I wish I could be the most popular girl in school...
wow..Im absolutely speechless..I couldnt stop reading..and the ending was perfect..wow..bravo! this is amazing..you are quite the writer..this inspires me to write something similar! most definitely going on my favorites list! and I`ll definitely recommend my friends to read this!
wow..Im still speechless
11/26/2006 c1 Peroxide
Um... I don't think /wow/ can cover it. That was amazing, The twist at the end - I could never quite make it work the way you do. Keep it up ^^
Whoo! 101th review!
Um... I don't think /wow/ can cover it. That was amazing, The twist at the end - I could never quite make it work the way you do. Keep it up ^^
Whoo! 101th review!