Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for The Muffin Man's Story

10/14/2005 c1 Arky72
The rhyme scheme in this one! You shoul put this to a tune and make it a fun song!
7/14/2004 c1 13Twizzlers
Wow, you're awesome. That was an awesome poem and I loved it. How did you come up with that? It's so creative. It cracks me up. Brillant.
Twizz
(ps. in case you were wondering how i came upon this, i was just clicking around on peoples favorites lists... : ) )
4/25/2004 c1 42Pineapple Dreams
cool! Grovyfied, i LOVED this its totally cute and groovy and well worth being proud of!
2/5/2004 c1 9Lunar Wulf Gemini
Cute, interesting. Well written
1/1/2004 c1 19Cardinal Chuck
Hehehe. you should be proud of this poem, it's good.
10/30/2003 c1 Andrew
Lis! That is So Funny lol HAHA tehee

O 9 yards(O=whole) Get it?
10/28/2003 c1 13avidelecteur
lol- I loved it all, especially your ending. I didn't flow perfectly, but the rhyming was great and didn't seem forced or anything. Great job!
10/17/2003 c1 Shadowrunner
*cackles*

Nice!

Sounds kind of like a Jack Perlutsky poem.

(That was a compliment.)

Good. Good, good.
10/13/2003 c1 2philoslove
lol... its really funny and cute... I like it! It's extremely creative...
10/12/2003 c1 32Morbane
Hey, well done on the rhyming here - it's brilliant! Very smooth-flowing. Perhaps this can get around, and there can be a Muffin Man Appreciation Day to save the poor chap. The opening/closing line is neat and sets the tone perfectly.
10/7/2003 c1 17Winged One1
Hehe...funny...made me think very much of Shrek! I like the rhymes in this and that the muffins are attitude-wise. XD

~winged one~

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service