for Teddy Bear Hugs
4610/7/2003 c1 K.G. Hollingsworth
I liked some of the imagery, but the stanza's lacked consistency. *I know I'm one to talk about this one... but I know it's a problem I have too.* So it was a bit too abrupt. A little bit would have been good, especially for this poem, but I think it was a bit to much.
I liked some of the imagery, but the stanza's lacked consistency. *I know I'm one to talk about this one... but I know it's a problem I have too.* So it was a bit too abrupt. A little bit would have been good, especially for this poem, but I think it was a bit to much.