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1/10/2004 c1 46scarywhenhyper
very nice job, the descriptions are really well done
10/7/2003 c1 K.G. Hollingsworth
I liked some of the imagery, but the stanza's lacked consistency. *I know I'm one to talk about this one... but I know it's a problem I have too.* So it was a bit too abrupt. A little bit would have been good, especially for this poem, but I think it was a bit to much.

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