for The Secret Station4/5/2005 c12 
1Pockymon
Yo! Returning the favor:It's always interesting to see the evolution of one's writing style. Sadly, I missed much of it, but from what I've read, it's an endearing story with cute, lovable characters. I really can't stand a story in which I could care less about the individuals. As for format, I think you could use fewer paragraphs (altho I understand why you break it up so much), and...Possession for a name that ends in "s" still carries "'s". ^_^
1PockymonYo! Returning the favor:It's always interesting to see the evolution of one's writing style. Sadly, I missed much of it, but from what I've read, it's an endearing story with cute, lovable characters. I really can't stand a story in which I could care less about the individuals. As for format, I think you could use fewer paragraphs (altho I understand why you break it up so much), and...Possession for a name that ends in "s" still carries "'s". ^_^
8/14/2004 c12 16Jasper Riddle
Nice. I like the story so far. Why DID they want Lila? I suppose all will be clear sometime, right?
Anywho, keep it up!
16Jasper RiddleNice. I like the story so far. Why DID they want Lila? I suppose all will be clear sometime, right?
Anywho, keep it up!
8/1/2004 c12 Greeneyes616
wow..this chapter was good, poor Hess though...keep on writing:)
~Greeneyes616
wow..this chapter was good, poor Hess though...keep on writing:)
~Greeneyes616
7/24/2004 c12 13Grace Hsia
This is quite interesting! Sorry if I might have missed a review or so for one of your chapters. Eek. This is quite interesting how you described the fight and how the other Kyrin was ripping off chunks of Hess.
Poor soul. I feel so bad for her! She's basically mutilated now isn't she. But was she very pretty in the beginning or was she not? (Can't remember...oops) If she was...wow...this must be really damaging to her pride. Anyhows, please update! Oh, and I was thinking of taking off Cursed from my story list and putting up a new story in its stead. Do you think I should?
*Orient Fox*
13Grace HsiaThis is quite interesting! Sorry if I might have missed a review or so for one of your chapters. Eek. This is quite interesting how you described the fight and how the other Kyrin was ripping off chunks of Hess.
Poor soul. I feel so bad for her! She's basically mutilated now isn't she. But was she very pretty in the beginning or was she not? (Can't remember...oops) If she was...wow...this must be really damaging to her pride. Anyhows, please update! Oh, and I was thinking of taking off Cursed from my story list and putting up a new story in its stead. Do you think I should?
*Orient Fox*
7/19/2004 c12 Purple Mouse
This story is really super interesting. There is only one thing wrong with it, you need to discribe how the characters look more. Other than that, it's awesome and I hope you update soon.
This story is really super interesting. There is only one thing wrong with it, you need to discribe how the characters look more. Other than that, it's awesome and I hope you update soon.
7/19/2004 c12 20Qu33n of Spades
Yay! Suddenly my day is made because there is a new chapter! *does a little dance* Ireth is happy, happy, happy. I loved this, and I still want a Mu plushie... It was long, but that just means there's more, and more is good!
20Qu33n of SpadesYay! Suddenly my day is made because there is a new chapter! *does a little dance* Ireth is happy, happy, happy. I loved this, and I still want a Mu plushie... It was long, but that just means there's more, and more is good!
7/19/2004 c12 1A Chroi
I definitely enjoyed this. This chapter had an "old West" sort of feel to it that I liked a lot. The descriptions were excellent, Inferno's especially. There were a few formatting problems (like the shrinking of ellipses to a single period), but nothing horrible. Kudos to you for a gripping chapter! Write more soon!
1A ChroiI definitely enjoyed this. This chapter had an "old West" sort of feel to it that I liked a lot. The descriptions were excellent, Inferno's especially. There were a few formatting problems (like the shrinking of ellipses to a single period), but nothing horrible. Kudos to you for a gripping chapter! Write more soon!
6/13/2004 c11 Lizopath
So far, so good...I like the way you describe things in this story. It has a hint of magic in it. You're also very good at cliff hangers..I can't wait to read the rest of the story!
So far, so good...I like the way you describe things in this story. It has a hint of magic in it. You're also very good at cliff hangers..I can't wait to read the rest of the story!
5/28/2004 c11 ChristianGeekGuy
Another good one. I was going to say that a little action was in order, but the end of the chapter fixed that, huh? Keep it up. This is one of my favorite ongoing FP stories.
Another good one. I was going to say that a little action was in order, but the end of the chapter fixed that, huh? Keep it up. This is one of my favorite ongoing FP stories.
5/27/2004 c5 Lauren334
These were 2 more good chapters! Very interesting and different kind of setting and the things going on. Hehe I liked when Rags stopped Lila from falling by *ahem* grabbing a certain part =P Well I can't wait to read more!
These were 2 more good chapters! Very interesting and different kind of setting and the things going on. Hehe I liked when Rags stopped Lila from falling by *ahem* grabbing a certain part =P Well I can't wait to read more!
5/25/2004 c3 Lauren334
Another good chapter! Sorry it took me so long between this review and the last, but now that school's out, I'll have lots of time for reading and reviewing! I liked learning a little of Lila's backround, but I'm still a little confused on the ghost train (I may have forgotten details from previous chapters though..sorry) Anywayz, I can't wait for Lila to meet up with Rags again. I like him =P I'm gonna finsh reading this story tomorrow hopefully! I can't wait though!
Another good chapter! Sorry it took me so long between this review and the last, but now that school's out, I'll have lots of time for reading and reviewing! I liked learning a little of Lila's backround, but I'm still a little confused on the ghost train (I may have forgotten details from previous chapters though..sorry) Anywayz, I can't wait for Lila to meet up with Rags again. I like him =P I'm gonna finsh reading this story tomorrow hopefully! I can't wait though!
5/23/2004 c11 A Chroi
Argh! You can't leave with a cliffie like that! *goes off into incomprehensible made-up swear words* Write more! This is wonderful; I love how there is such a handle on the description. When you write for Lila, the things you see are through her eyes, are unfamiliar to her, and are associated with the things she would know. Same thing for Rags; it's great how much effort you put into this. Please write more soon? *puppy-eyes* Pretty please?
Argh! You can't leave with a cliffie like that! *goes off into incomprehensible made-up swear words* Write more! This is wonderful; I love how there is such a handle on the description. When you write for Lila, the things you see are through her eyes, are unfamiliar to her, and are associated with the things she would know. Same thing for Rags; it's great how much effort you put into this. Please write more soon? *puppy-eyes* Pretty please?
5/22/2004 c11 20Qu33n of Spades
Woot! This is great... for a while at the beginning I was thinking, "Peter Pan" meets "The Ear, the Eye, and the Arm", and then... voila! it's completely different and a lot more appealing that the combination of those two would be. You've got a cool little world here goin' on... keep writing, I'm begging you here! (Mu is awesome. Where can I get one? *lol*)
20Qu33n of SpadesWoot! This is great... for a while at the beginning I was thinking, "Peter Pan" meets "The Ear, the Eye, and the Arm", and then... voila! it's completely different and a lot more appealing that the combination of those two would be. You've got a cool little world here goin' on... keep writing, I'm begging you here! (Mu is awesome. Where can I get one? *lol*)
5/21/2004 c11 13Grace Hsia
She does it again! Yes, it is another excellent chapter. Love how Mu is such a sweet little catfish! ^_^ I will say more in the next review! I promise...it's just that I kind of have a ton of homework and research to do. Urgh. 13.5 more days of school left! YAY!
*Orient Fox*
13Grace HsiaShe does it again! Yes, it is another excellent chapter. Love how Mu is such a sweet little catfish! ^_^ I will say more in the next review! I promise...it's just that I kind of have a ton of homework and research to do. Urgh. 13.5 more days of school left! YAY!
*Orient Fox*
5/11/2004 c10 1Mirra The Dragon
Another great chapter! I especially like the added presence of Mu. He's cute in a fishy sort of way.
1Mirra The DragonAnother great chapter! I especially like the added presence of Mu. He's cute in a fishy sort of way.