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5/18/2004 c1 5Wind Blown Hair
Oh god! You made me cry!The very fp piece to make me cry. This is good. There was somewhere where you started a sentence with i instead of I (an attepmt to give a well rounded critique). This is just beautiful.
11/4/2003 c1 22Samii Tiger
I'm seriously crying now... This is almost exactly how I feel about my ex... Except I'm not going to go stalk her...

Damn... And it fits perfectly, too... I am a poet and she is an artist... And I am in love with her still...

~*~*~*~

Let the heart not show its weakness,

Lest that weakness be exploited,

But one that owns my heart,

You are more noble than this deed.

~*~*~*~

-Tiger
10/9/2003 c1 Caster
Tut tut tut! You should never tell yourself you suck! As a matter of fact, I read this and it was like you knew who I was and was writing about me! I like this guy (understatment of the year!) but he hardly knows I exist. I try to convince myself that someone better for me will come, but it's hard to believe. So I sink into the background and watch, because it's all I can do. Really, this is great. Don't seel youself short.
10/8/2003 c1 9happy-fetus
you suck

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