for Understanding the Soul10/12/2003 c1 
9Misty Woods
WOW! This is really meaningful and beautiful! I can see that it's full of deep thought. I liked the unique style and the unusual language. Great job and keep it up!
9Misty WoodsWOW! This is really meaningful and beautiful! I can see that it's full of deep thought. I liked the unique style and the unusual language. Great job and keep it up!
10/9/2003 c1 58Alyx Bradford
This is very descriptive. I presume you're talking about astral travel? I like the language you use, but it seemss sort of like you wrote a paragraph and then inserted line breaks to make it look like a poem. All the same, it's very expressive and has a nice personal quality to it. Good job.
58Alyx BradfordThis is very descriptive. I presume you're talking about astral travel? I like the language you use, but it seemss sort of like you wrote a paragraph and then inserted line breaks to make it look like a poem. All the same, it's very expressive and has a nice personal quality to it. Good job.