for A Collection of Poems6/20/2004 c20 
131HoldinOn2Him
Oh that was lovely. All these peices were awesome. Thanks for sharing Star. God Bless you always xoxox
131HoldinOn2HimOh that was lovely. All these peices were awesome. Thanks for sharing Star. God Bless you always xoxox
1/2/2004 c20 148JJR Meerraf
What a wonderful message! I can almost hear the song in my head, and it's beautiful! Excellent work!
My only critiquing comment, something that's just a pet peeve of mine. You should, (in my opinion) capitialize all uses of you, your, and stuff like that when talking about God.
Never the less. It was still a wonderful poem! Now I move on to the next collection of poems!
148JJR MeerrafWhat a wonderful message! I can almost hear the song in my head, and it's beautiful! Excellent work!
My only critiquing comment, something that's just a pet peeve of mine. You should, (in my opinion) capitialize all uses of you, your, and stuff like that when talking about God.
Never the less. It was still a wonderful poem! Now I move on to the next collection of poems!
12/19/2003 c9 PainKiller
Wow... you set forth your message with perfect, vivid tones. Simply brilliant use of imagery throughout this crypic, sorrowfully gorgeous poem.
Wow... you set forth your message with perfect, vivid tones. Simply brilliant use of imagery throughout this crypic, sorrowfully gorgeous poem.
12/19/2003 c8 PainKiller
I've grown to love your endings; they have such a sense of completetion and resolution to them. Your wording was perfectly chosen, with lines like 'melt into the darkness', 'tiny ray of love', and 'glistens in the pitch blackness'. Nice turn in the 8th line; as usual, awesome work!
I've grown to love your endings; they have such a sense of completetion and resolution to them. Your wording was perfectly chosen, with lines like 'melt into the darkness', 'tiny ray of love', and 'glistens in the pitch blackness'. Nice turn in the 8th line; as usual, awesome work!
12/19/2003 c7 PainKiller
Very sweet. :) The ryhming flowed wonderfully. Your use of repetition in the first three lines moved along excellently. Great ending to this great poem!
Very sweet. :) The ryhming flowed wonderfully. Your use of repetition in the first three lines moved along excellently. Great ending to this great poem!
12/15/2003 c1 Kyrsta Shay
WOUNDERFUL i LOVE IT! YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHO THIS IS *WINK WINK* LOL I LOVE IT! great work :) Star :)
WOUNDERFUL i LOVE IT! YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHO THIS IS *WINK WINK* LOL I LOVE IT! great work :) Star :)
12/14/2003 c6 PainKiller
I love the message! Wonderfully crafted with the sweet beginning that faded into a dark feeling, then out to resolution.
I love the message! Wonderfully crafted with the sweet beginning that faded into a dark feeling, then out to resolution.
12/14/2003 c5 PainKiller
*sigh* So peaceful, sweet and serene. It gave me a wonderful sense of completetion... I'm not completely sure why, but I think it sprung from this stanza:
Then suddenly light came from above / And peace came down softly like a dove
Great work here!
*sigh* So peaceful, sweet and serene. It gave me a wonderful sense of completetion... I'm not completely sure why, but I think it sprung from this stanza:
Then suddenly light came from above / And peace came down softly like a dove
Great work here!
12/14/2003 c4 PainKiller
Powerful, intense, and poignant; I love the minimal wording for maximum effect. This was a brilliant poem, which has a wonderful effect on the reader (myself). The turn in the line beginning with 'Only the few can fill...' was employed well. Excellent work.
Powerful, intense, and poignant; I love the minimal wording for maximum effect. This was a brilliant poem, which has a wonderful effect on the reader (myself). The turn in the line beginning with 'Only the few can fill...' was employed well. Excellent work.
12/11/2003 c19 148JJR Meerraf
A very good question, one that I need to take more seriously! Great inspiration, as all of yours are. Excellent stuff!
148JJR MeerrafA very good question, one that I need to take more seriously! Great inspiration, as all of yours are. Excellent stuff!
12/11/2003 c18 JJR Meerraf
That was brilliant! Nothing is cooler than people dying for God! I don't know if you've read Jesus Freaks, but it's a great book...
Sorry, rambling...
anyway, great poem!
That was brilliant! Nothing is cooler than people dying for God! I don't know if you've read Jesus Freaks, but it's a great book...
Sorry, rambling...
anyway, great poem!