for A Token of Nothing10/22/2003 c1 
27Exceedingly Eccentric
I SEE MY LINE! Hehehehehe! This was the absolute greatest thing we did in class...mine turned out so random. It was about music and then someone whithering on the floor. (*Twitch!*) lol Rachael, Rachael. This made me giggle. We're such a optimistic group of people, yes we are.
27Exceedingly EccentricI SEE MY LINE! Hehehehehe! This was the absolute greatest thing we did in class...mine turned out so random. It was about music and then someone whithering on the floor. (*Twitch!*) lol Rachael, Rachael. This made me giggle. We're such a optimistic group of people, yes we are.
10/11/2003 c1 Angele Raye
Fairly amazing, considering the dopes I have in my english class. :P You could tell, that different people had written it. I would suggest tweaking the punctuation to make it flow better. Some could be ommited, some added in the middle of phrases, but that's just me. I'd also like to point out a grammatical error,
"She wouldn't be REMEMBERED for much longer"
Very interesting write,
Raye
Fairly amazing, considering the dopes I have in my english class. :P You could tell, that different people had written it. I would suggest tweaking the punctuation to make it flow better. Some could be ommited, some added in the middle of phrases, but that's just me. I'd also like to point out a grammatical error,
"She wouldn't be REMEMBERED for much longer"
Very interesting write,
Raye
10/10/2003 c1 196Damaged
Wow! This is excellent! I can't wait for you to post more from your writing class! ^_^
196DamagedWow! This is excellent! I can't wait for you to post more from your writing class! ^_^
10/9/2003 c1 70insert name here
wow, thats really cool, its neat to read something that that many minds worked together to create...just curious which line was urs?
~brendz~
70insert name herewow, thats really cool, its neat to read something that that many minds worked together to create...just curious which line was urs?
~brendz~
10/8/2003 c1 132Sarah Parker
Wow... this poem is so amazingly powerful, and so creative... the idea of everyone writing one line is awesome, and the result - this poem - is incredible. I love the descriptivness and the metaphors, and the whole thing in general.
132Sarah ParkerWow... this poem is so amazingly powerful, and so creative... the idea of everyone writing one line is awesome, and the result - this poem - is incredible. I love the descriptivness and the metaphors, and the whole thing in general.
10/8/2003 c1 24echoes of chaos
you and your class should all get applause for a well-written poem that completely ties in together line-by-line. check out my poem, The Most Popular Girl In School...thats a pretty weird suicide poem that I wrote for school once.
24echoes of chaosyou and your class should all get applause for a well-written poem that completely ties in together line-by-line. check out my poem, The Most Popular Girl In School...thats a pretty weird suicide poem that I wrote for school once.