
10/11/2003 c1
117Seras Nova
This was pretty good, could have flowed a bit better though. Nice work.
Keep writing.
-Seras

This was pretty good, could have flowed a bit better though. Nice work.
Keep writing.
-Seras
10/10/2003 c1
196Damaged
Wow. This poem is so sad. I'm so sorry this has happened, once again. I can't imagine what it felt like to see that (am I sounding like a broken record yet? ^_~ ) Keep up the good work! I can't wait until you update again.

Wow. This poem is so sad. I'm so sorry this has happened, once again. I can't imagine what it felt like to see that (am I sounding like a broken record yet? ^_~ ) Keep up the good work! I can't wait until you update again.
10/8/2003 c1
132Sarah Parker
The best part of this entire poem are the last two lines. They're just so... pow! completely awesome.. it's a very sad poem. I'm glad you're feeling happier times and have found the secret to just moving on.

The best part of this entire poem are the last two lines. They're just so... pow! completely awesome.. it's a very sad poem. I'm glad you're feeling happier times and have found the secret to just moving on.