for Eternity11/3/2004 c1 heyou
that was touching
that was touching
8/13/2004 c1 
35Mime
Aw, this is so sweet! I'm sorry for about your grandfather, and I'm sure both your grandparents appreciate your kindness very much! Keep writing!
35MimeAw, this is so sweet! I'm sorry for about your grandfather, and I'm sure both your grandparents appreciate your kindness very much! Keep writing!
8/6/2004 c1 122alwayslove
Wow, it sounds like you really cared for your grandfather, im sry for his death, but on the brighter note: the poem is beautiful, i'd like to see some more work from u!
122alwaysloveWow, it sounds like you really cared for your grandfather, im sry for his death, but on the brighter note: the poem is beautiful, i'd like to see some more work from u!
10/11/2003 c1 12evie-writes
nice work... too bad we can't put stanzas in here =( that sad atmosphere is strongly created and i like the idea of regrowin of leaves!
12evie-writesnice work... too bad we can't put stanzas in here =( that sad atmosphere is strongly created and i like the idea of regrowin of leaves!
10/9/2003 c1 Garligarloo
This poem is marvellous! I find it extremely touching. The words used are graceful and give a sense of sadness. I can fully feel the love between your grandma and grandpa! Well done, poet Thepolia! =)=)
This poem is marvellous! I find it extremely touching. The words used are graceful and give a sense of sadness. I can fully feel the love between your grandma and grandpa! Well done, poet Thepolia! =)=)