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11/3/2004 c1 heyou
that was touching
8/13/2004 c1 35Mime
Aw, this is so sweet! I'm sorry for about your grandfather, and I'm sure both your grandparents appreciate your kindness very much! Keep writing!
8/6/2004 c1 122alwayslove
Wow, it sounds like you really cared for your grandfather, im sry for his death, but on the brighter note: the poem is beautiful, i'd like to see some more work from u!
10/11/2003 c1 12evie-writes
nice work... too bad we can't put stanzas in here =( that sad atmosphere is strongly created and i like the idea of regrowin of leaves!
10/9/2003 c1 Garligarloo
This poem is marvellous! I find it extremely touching. The words used are graceful and give a sense of sadness. I can fully feel the love between your grandma and grandpa! Well done, poet Thepolia! =)=)

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