
8/13/2013 c8
7Redrosey18
So cute, I love how you added the bad past with zack. Can't wait for more, and please update soon!

So cute, I love how you added the bad past with zack. Can't wait for more, and please update soon!
7/17/2012 c1 chinun
oooh i can not wait for another update-
(realizing that it has not been updated for almost 9 years or so)
i'm not ready to wait for another update ! ;A;/
i will support you (through prayers) so you can update this! ;w;/
oooh i can not wait for another update-
(realizing that it has not been updated for almost 9 years or so)
i'm not ready to wait for another update ! ;A;/
i will support you (through prayers) so you can update this! ;w;/
5/12/2012 c2 Tra-vation
Pourquoi m'observez-vous? Qu'est-ce vous voient-il?
should probably be
Pourquoi m' observez-vous? Qu'est-ce que vous voyez?
(The last sentences says What is it that you see?) (if that's what you intended then that's a better way to say it)
Pourquoi m'observez-vous? Qu'est-ce vous voient-il?
should probably be
Pourquoi m' observez-vous? Qu'est-ce que vous voyez?
(The last sentences says What is it that you see?) (if that's what you intended then that's a better way to say it)
1/2/2012 c6 Fairy225
What was the picture? You didn't say what it was. (Awesome story so far, by the way)
What was the picture? You didn't say what it was. (Awesome story so far, by the way)
8/27/2011 c8
2Derby Girl
when i finished this i wanted to cry! want to know why? because it looks like there is so much more to come but you haven't updated it in, what was it? SEVEN FREAKING YEARS. so i think its kinda safe to say this is over... BUT IT WAS SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS STORY!
There wasn't even any, you know... touchy feely going on. D=
...anyway, you probably wont even read this (7 YEARS!), so I will go wallow in sadness for a while...
But to end on a happy note - yay! i love this story!

when i finished this i wanted to cry! want to know why? because it looks like there is so much more to come but you haven't updated it in, what was it? SEVEN FREAKING YEARS. so i think its kinda safe to say this is over... BUT IT WAS SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS STORY!
There wasn't even any, you know... touchy feely going on. D=
...anyway, you probably wont even read this (7 YEARS!), so I will go wallow in sadness for a while...
But to end on a happy note - yay! i love this story!
4/20/2011 c8
8Dreaming Maya
I will be your bodyguard,
You can be my long lost pal ...
I just thought of that song reading this.
WILL YOU UPDATE!

I will be your bodyguard,
You can be my long lost pal ...
I just thought of that song reading this.
WILL YOU UPDATE!
10/3/2010 c8 Die In A Hole With Penguins
Rawr! I love this story it is amazing I have never read anything like it! You make the french guy seem so uber sexy!
Rawr! I love this story it is amazing I have never read anything like it! You make the french guy seem so uber sexy!
7/29/2009 c8 greengarbage
Well, the teen drama doesn't impress me, but I can understand how important it is to Zacks character. Ah...are these two going to introduce themselves to each other at some point? Using names? There's been a thanksful lack of delving into his music tastes and his skateboarding, thank you so much. It would make an interesting segue later though to see what Love interest #1 makes of his hobbies though.
I'm very interested to know how our grieving frenchman handles the age difference...though isn't Europe a bit more lenient about those?
I'm showing my age I think. Teen!angst and drama don't have the same appeal. I want to see Zack Grow up a little bit. At least emotionally. How do you have an adult relationship when you're biggest worry is if your Guidence counselor catches you? LMAO. Er...perhaps "adult relationship" is a little...lot...premature.
Well, the teen drama doesn't impress me, but I can understand how important it is to Zacks character. Ah...are these two going to introduce themselves to each other at some point? Using names? There's been a thanksful lack of delving into his music tastes and his skateboarding, thank you so much. It would make an interesting segue later though to see what Love interest #1 makes of his hobbies though.
I'm very interested to know how our grieving frenchman handles the age difference...though isn't Europe a bit more lenient about those?
I'm showing my age I think. Teen!angst and drama don't have the same appeal. I want to see Zack Grow up a little bit. At least emotionally. How do you have an adult relationship when you're biggest worry is if your Guidence counselor catches you? LMAO. Er...perhaps "adult relationship" is a little...lot...premature.
7/9/2009 c5 misaki
when you said 'red black hair' you mean black hair with red highlights?
when you said 'red black hair' you mean black hair with red highlights?
3/26/2009 c8
2Keona Raynalise
NO! Y did u STOP! IT WUZ GETTIN GOOD! Plz take it up againand update? ITS A GREAAT STORY! PLZ? I LOVE UR STOORY!

NO! Y did u STOP! IT WUZ GETTIN GOOD! Plz take it up againand update? ITS A GREAAT STORY! PLZ? I LOVE UR STOORY!
12/23/2008 c8 oo
hey, its been like 4 years, did ya die? coma, amnesia?
well, i just wanted to say
happy holidays and update dude!
hey, its been like 4 years, did ya die? coma, amnesia?
well, i just wanted to say
happy holidays and update dude!