for Morning Fix10/16/2003 c2 
217MistrissD
bwah! Im tempted to translate the french myself, but no no ^.^ I'll wait for future chapters hehe, its a nice addition, keep it up!
217MistrissDbwah! Im tempted to translate the french myself, but no no ^.^ I'll wait for future chapters hehe, its a nice addition, keep it up!
10/16/2003 c1 158outruntheavalanche
I dunno why, but I like this a lot. I like how you put us in the protagonist's head... Good job :) Hopefully, there will be many more chapters! :)
- Alex
158outruntheavalancheI dunno why, but I like this a lot. I like how you put us in the protagonist's head... Good job :) Hopefully, there will be many more chapters! :)
- Alex
10/16/2003 c2 1FallenAngel221
I'd read the first chapter a long time ago and I forgot to review so here, I like the story you set up it's really interesting and I'd like to see more, after Chapter 2, that was kind of mean of Joel to do that to Zack. It was cute you had Zack kind of 'like' him, but yeah. till the next update
Joel :-D
1FallenAngel221I'd read the first chapter a long time ago and I forgot to review so here, I like the story you set up it's really interesting and I'd like to see more, after Chapter 2, that was kind of mean of Joel to do that to Zack. It was cute you had Zack kind of 'like' him, but yeah. till the next update
Joel :-D
10/9/2003 c1 Caster
*grabs coller and begins to shake Theoriginalflame1 frantacally* Oh my gosh! This is the cutest, greatest, more adorable story of fp.com since it began, and you MUST continue it! At least let them meet! Or talk! I just love how he slips the note to him! Get Joel to translate it for him! Oh, please? *gets on knees and grovels* This story is too good for words! But it'll be even better if you update soon!
*grabs coller and begins to shake Theoriginalflame1 frantacally* Oh my gosh! This is the cutest, greatest, more adorable story of fp.com since it began, and you MUST continue it! At least let them meet! Or talk! I just love how he slips the note to him! Get Joel to translate it for him! Oh, please? *gets on knees and grovels* This story is too good for words! But it'll be even better if you update soon!
10/9/2003 c1 1Asteldoth
Sounds like this is going to turn out to be quiet the sappy fic. I look forward to more chapters ^_^
1AsteldothSounds like this is going to turn out to be quiet the sappy fic. I look forward to more chapters ^_^
10/9/2003 c1 11PocketFox
Oh wow. I love this! I can't wait til you update again. This is a great story concept. Poor kid! And don't worry about whatever grammar or spelling problems there might be - there's hardly any, and the only reason I noticed them is because I'm an anal perfectionist. ^_~ Kudos, and keep up the wonderful work!
11PocketFoxOh wow. I love this! I can't wait til you update again. This is a great story concept. Poor kid! And don't worry about whatever grammar or spelling problems there might be - there's hardly any, and the only reason I noticed them is because I'm an anal perfectionist. ^_~ Kudos, and keep up the wonderful work!