for When left to think in faultless silence10/30/2003 c1 
185decayedmatter
I like the twist in this poem. It has a touch of tragedy and twisted peace all at the same time... I like it.
185decayedmatterI like the twist in this poem. It has a touch of tragedy and twisted peace all at the same time... I like it.
10/14/2003 c1 1aleppine
I saw the title and fell in love with it.
This is very beautiful ... I loved, small part though it might be, 'In a bedroom, where everyone is asleep...' Don't ask why. Maybe cos you said 'a' and not 'my' or similar.
The use of repetition also works very well in this. I like the size of it. And you would have some sort of mention of guns in there, wouldn't you?
Anyway, it did the title justice. You're a sly one, you are, you know I don't use the review alerts due to an already overflowing inbox and yet you don't tell me when you post new things up ...
*has bone to pick with you*
Once again, lovely. My kind of title. Yeah. *drools*
1aleppineI saw the title and fell in love with it.
This is very beautiful ... I loved, small part though it might be, 'In a bedroom, where everyone is asleep...' Don't ask why. Maybe cos you said 'a' and not 'my' or similar.
The use of repetition also works very well in this. I like the size of it. And you would have some sort of mention of guns in there, wouldn't you?
Anyway, it did the title justice. You're a sly one, you are, you know I don't use the review alerts due to an already overflowing inbox and yet you don't tell me when you post new things up ...
*has bone to pick with you*
Once again, lovely. My kind of title. Yeah. *drools*
10/10/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
i cant summarize it either, but it is an excellent poem... completely true with a great message.. thanks so much for your reviews!
612simpleplan13i cant summarize it either, but it is an excellent poem... completely true with a great message.. thanks so much for your reviews!