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1/15/2006 c1 59HellHeartedlyBent
i liked this, very pretty. very clear and your points come across in a striaghtforward fashion. keep it up
4/15/2005 c1 95beti213
another great one-I love the way you write, very stream-of-consciousness (translation: post more!) I felt as if it could have ended on the third to last line, but the last two lines end it just as well... just something to consider. great writing!
12/17/2003 c1 20aviatrix
The first two stanzas are lyrically brilliant. The rest kinda falls into generic teen angst, though.
10/11/2003 c1 84Jaclyn
-depression is not so much a feeling

as it is a state of mind.-

Who... :-O
10/10/2003 c1 74Yelen
The title drew me in and the beginning is effective because it sounds like the middle of an intimate conversation between friends, making it the more personal. "depression is not so much a feeling

as it is a state of mind."

Liked that a lot. Again, nice work.

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